Chapter 1: Rrally cute

Chapter 1: Awe this was sweet. I enjoy finding some Luntoria! Keep up the writing.~

This story is really good, please make more luntoria, I really love this story

Okay..I liked the story, but I'll give you some tips: it seems to be a oneshot right? It was cute ^_^
But, you should put the story in a chapter, instead of in the foreword and set the story in 'complete'. This way, a lot more people will see it and they might actually comment on it.
Now it just seems like it's uncomplete and there's no story yet, so some people might not even take a look. People who do take a look and see the whole oneshot in the foreword will get confused (like I was).
I hope you'll make the adjustments and good luck with future stories! :)