Chapter 1: whoa i got goosebumps. u purposely want to left the ending hanging and tragic like that right? kkk i actually like it. its different. hwaiting on your other story authornim ^^
Chapter 2: Your story is different from the usual Yongseo fic, I love it. I hope you can improve your english so that your stories would be even more wonderful, coz you've got great ideas. Let's learn together! Fighting!!
Chapter 1: Is the sequel? Or one shot? You wanna try to tell, you must take your good chance, cause other chance mybe not come to you again. Like there is no second chance, so when you have your chance you must take it very well. Am I wrong author?
Chapter 1: I don't really understand the last part. My english is bad... Anyway, nice story and maybe i could figure out what the last part using the next chapter. Update soon ^^
Chapter 1: Actually I dont understand at all.is it inception? The ending of this chapter ia confusing me..maybe my lack of english is the cause of it..
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