Trainees

IRIS! || Woolim Label and SM C&C's newest girlgroup || Sister-group of EXO
JUNG SOO MIN (STEPHANIE JUNG)
 
 
birthname: Jung soo min (정수민)
stage name: stephanie
hangul: 스테파니
birthdate: july 21, 1994
birthplace: san francisco, california
height: 168cm
weight: 50kg
bloodtype: O
notable family members: krystal jung of f(x) and Jessica jung of snsd
trainee years: 3
languages: english(fluent); korean(fluent); japanese(conversational)
position: main vocalist 1

status: ready to debut. 






 
 


 
PARK JAEYEON (LEXA PARK)
 
 
birthname: park jaeyeon (박재연)
stagename: lexa
hangul: 레그사
birthdate: july 27, 1994
birthplace: seoul, south korea
height: 167cm
weight: 48kg
bloodtype: ab
notable family members: cousin of park chanyeol(exo)
trainee years: 2
languages: english(fluent), korean(fluent); chinese(basic); chinese(basic)
position: lead vocalist 1, sub-rapper(

comment: you've mentioned in your background that she was born in la but then you mentioned on the earlier parts of the app that she was born in seoul, please fix this! :) hmm i also think that being short-tempered is too shallow of a flaw. :) but oh well, despite of those two, you have a very beautiful said app! ^_^ 

status: still training

 
 
 
JI HYEHYUN (FUJIWARA MICHIYO)
 
 
birthname: Fujiwara michiyo (藤原 三千代)
stage name: wish 
hangul: 
수원
birthdate: april 1, 1992
birthplace: hiroshima prefacture, japan
height: 170cm
weight: 50kg
bloodtype: a
notable family members: ---
trainee years: 9
languages: japanese(native); korean(fluent); english(proficient);                                                   mandarin(conversational)
position: leader, power vocalist(main vocalist 2, rapper)

comment: one word for your app-- wow. it has a lot of elements in it specially in her background and you've managed to connect the dots from her liking to music, to her parents being against her love of music into the present time. good job and i'll definitely consider your suggestions! ^^

status: ready to debut
 


 
BAEK EUNMI (EUN BAEK)
 
 
birthname: baek eunmi (백 은 미)
stagename: eun
hangul: 

birthdate: december 24, 1994
birthplace: seoul, south korea
height: 168cm
weight: 53kg
bloodtype: b+
notable family members: ---
trainee years: 7
languages: korean, japanese(fluent); english(conversational); chinese(limited)
position: main dancer, rapper(main rapper, sub-vocalist)

comment: hmm everything is great, im just unsure when she developed her love for music... could you fix that? hehe thank you~ ^^ and at what age did her mother met her step-father? 



status: ready to debut
 
 
CHOI JAERIN (YUKIMURA KAIRI)
 
 
birthname: yukimura kairi (幸村カイリ)
stage name: kai
hangul: 가이
birthdate: march 27, 1991
birthplace: Hiroshima, japan
height: 165cm
weight: 51kg
bloodtype: b+
notable family members: ---
trainee years: 7
languages: japanese(native); korean(fluent); english(conversational); chinese(basic)
position: lead vocalist 1, sub-rapper(main vocalist 2, sub-rapper)

comment: your app is very well written, but there are some parts i would like to clarify. you mentioned in the first part that she was born in hiroshima and that she was accepted in gyeonggido but you didn't mention in her background that her family moved back to korea or anything. please clarify this :) 

status: still training
 


 
OH MIYU (OH JAYOUNG)
 
 
birthname: oh jayoung
stagename: miyu
hangul: 미유
birthdate: february 14, 1996
birthplace: tokyo, japan
height: 164cm
weight: 50kg
bloodtype: o
notable family members: ---
trainee years: 4
languages: korean, japanese(fluent); chinese(basic); english(conversational)
position:triple threat, maknae(Main vocalist 2,sub-rapper)

comment: could you please enumerate more on how she found out about her love for music, it was rather quite shallow specially because you just mentioned that she suddenly found a talent in all types of art skills. :)

status: still training
 
 
HAN NAEUN (HAN HANNA)
 
 
birthname: han naeun
stagename: naeun
hangul: 한나
birthdate: March 14, 1993
birthplace: vancouver, canada
height: 169cm
weight: 48kg
bloodtype: a
notable family members: ---
trainee years: 6
languages: korean(fluent); english(semi-fluent); japanese(basic)
position: leader, power vocalist(main vocalist 2, rapper)

comment: your app is great~ but could you give an even deeper background on how she developed her love for music? :)

status: still training
 
 
SON EUNJAE (NELLE SON)
 
 
birthname: son eunjae
stagename: nelle
hangul: 넬
birthdate: incheon, south korea
height: 168cm
weight: 52kg
bloodtype: o
notable family members: ---
trainee years: 4
languages: korean(native);english(fluent)
position: lead rapper, sub-vocalist(main rapper, sub-vocalist)

comment: you mentioned that she is fluent in english and yet she doesn't have any english backgrounds or experience in learning it or living in another country so could you please fix that? :)))

status: still training
 
 
CHO ISEUL (CHO E SEUL)
 
 
birthname: cho iseul
stagename: e seul
hangul: 이슬
birthdate: june 8, 1990
birthplace: busan, south korea
height: 178cm
weight: 52kg
bloodtype: o+
notable family members: kiala(retired model)
trainee years: 5
languages: korean(native); tagalog(conversational);japanese(basic)
position: lead vocalist 3 (main dancer, rapper)

comment: could you redo your background? :) you didnt really write a background of your character and how she grew to love music and wanted to be who she is now, but instead wrote about her parents :)

status: still training
 
 
CHA HANI (HANIEL CHA)
 
 
birthname: cha hani
stagename: haniel
hangul: 하늘
birthdate: april 16, 1995
birthplace: changwon, south korea
height: 165cm
weight: 53kg
bloodtype: b
notable family members: n(member of vixx)
trainee years: 5
languages: korean(native); english(basic, learning)
position: lead dancer 1, vocalist, visual (main dancer, rapper)

comment: could you redo your background? :) you didnt really write a background of your character and how she grew to love music and wanted to be who she is now, but instead wrote about her parents :)

status: still training
 
 
KIM MINDAE (XIAOMIN KIM)
 
 
birthname: kim mindae
stagename: xiaomin
hangul: 시아오민
birthdate: january 10, 1993
birthplace: seoul, south korea
height: 171cm
weight: 5kg(?)
bloodtype: o
notable family members: xiumin(member or EXO)
trainee years: 2years and 4months
languages: korean(native); mandarin(fluent); japanese(basic); english(convo)
position: main vocalist 2, sub-rapper (lead vocalist 2,rapper)

comment: uhm how should i say this, hmm I think she has too much of a perfect background. she knows too many languages and she's fluent in chinese while her brother isn't even fluent despite him being in a chinese sub-unit. :) and regarding you including the kris situation in your background, it doesnt really quite suit your background because it is supposedly yours and well, i don't really want to associate the kris' situation with my story~ :) and also your trainee years and getting accepted to sm in your background is rather contradicting each other so please fix them :)
status: still training
 
 
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Congratulations to d-mbhee! And thank you for following my comment on deepening certain parts of her background, I really enjoyed reading it afterwards~ :)))

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rainbowkisses
#2
i'm going to turn in my application on monday :)
sayyehet #3
hello there i realized i missed the 'trainee life' section so i refilled it (: please go check it out here : http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/866493 ^^ oh and i added something in 'habits' and 'scene requests', do check it out too :P
armymi
#4
please tell me of mistakes ^^ http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/868083
armymi
#5
Chapter 1: authornim may i ask for the source code? i can't seem to find it anywhere >.<
sayyehet #6
Chapter 2: hello there sorry for the mistakes ><
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i changed eunjae's fluency of english from fluent into proficient.
eunjae attended an international school with her mother saying that she must learn english well, i mentioned that in the 'trivia' part (:
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i hope there are no more problems teehee
Eyesmile-Jiyu
#7
Annyeong author-nim! I present you Cha Hani also known as "Haniel"
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/867760
heebumdae
#8
Chapter 2: oh woops! ill fix that right away--
ill just add more
i like adding in a little bit if the parents side (i was yelled at in the past for not doing so--)

but ill add the music part right away, sorry about that!
heebumdae
#9
i have finished my app!
i hope you like her <3
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/864490
d-mbhee
#10
Chapter 10: omg omg omg. really? sjsjbgak;
my poor heart, i need to calm down.
and she's in the chinese sub group.
akdhdh; okay. i'm calm.. ish.