Insanely Sane

Description

     The extent of our ignorance...the extent of our selfishness makes us forget a world that has been put into exile by our modern day society. We don’t see these people clearly; we don’t pay attention to those cast away from us; we forget those that don’t affect us. But one day, we turn on the television after our regular meal and sink further into our seat, shocked by the bloody mess greeting us. Many find this gruesome state disgusting and flip the channel to watch a soap opera that makes us feel good inside. Others linger on this news report, barely glimpsing at the screen as they settle in for dessert. The bloody mess is a girl named Lee Jin, but the audience hadn’t paid enough attention to realize this, as her name was mentioned only once, and never again. The attention of the audience is given to the pretty reporter as she explains the situation. 
     There had been a fight in a mental institute located near the country sides, a place where nobody would ever go. And this fight would bring out, from the shadows, a truth that was to hit the general public right smack in the face, and from the darkness where nobody would even try to explore, was none other than a twisted love.

Date: September 3rd, 2011

Situation: Unstable; interview with murderer

Motivation/conflict: Unknown

Death: 1, a man by the name Kim Jaejoong.

Witness account: 1, guard, from the window.

"I don't know anything! I'm just a guard! But... well, he hit her... and she hit him. Blood was on the windows, but the weird thing is, neither threw curses at each other. It was a fight, but it was a silent fight. No grunts, no groans; it even seemed graceful for a while, until you noticed the blood."

Foreword

 

Heys :) This is ICEDCOFFEE again hehehe

Anyways, I'm just going to say a few things, starting with how I hope you will enjoy this story (but it will only be a one-shot maybe with epilogue)! The story will be told through an interview with the main female character and a few flashbacks. I also hope to inform you that this one shot is not a "happily ever after story" and I by far, am not a fairytale writer, also, most of my stories do not end up happily ever after... 
And then, this story is written in a dramatic sense, so that the plot will be more enjoyable, and more meaningful, even if this is a more dramatic version of what happens in reality. I do not mean to offend anybody or to attack anybody, rather, I am writing fiction and it should remain fiction. 
P.S. It is not meant for posing Jaejoong as a mentally retarded patient to be offensive, rather, please think of it as if Jaejoong is acting a role. The only reason I use Jaejoong in my story is because I also am a fan of his.

- ICEDCOFFEE 
Thanks for reading!

~Character introduction~

Lee Jin; 21; female


“I’ve seen them… I’ve seen them die, and still, nobody remembers them. The carved names on the graves are people with a wandering soul, a soul rejected by even their loved ones. They leave no memory; they leave no trace, for they are seen as unworthy to leave a footstep. Nobody listens to the words of the mentally unstable.”

“I hear voices, but those voices don’t tell me to kill. Your ‘normal’ people are starting wars, killing millions on billions at a time… and you call us insane.”

Kim Jaejoong; 25; male 


“Nothing hurts more than knowing that that sun is out of reach. I can withstand that pain though. What tears me down, is the fact that you can’t reach it either.”

“You love me too, right? Then, please, make this end quicker… I want to see that sun. I want to feel that warmth. I want you to be with me…away from these bars.”

~

 

“She… doesn’t seem at all crazy,” Said the female police officer, barely audible as she was whispering.

“Shut up and listen to her story already, but you don’t need to take down anything… her words are not accountable, after all, she is coming from a mental institute.”

“But wouldn’t it be better to take record of it?”

“Record my . The real record will be what we get from the camera. This, this is just entertainment for the public. Watch her make a fool of herself.” 

- ICEDCOFFEE :) Hope you enjoy it :P

(P.S. Thanks to amy91luvKey from http://ver-sah-tyle.blogspot.com for the WAY TOO AWESOME poster and backgrounds :) THANKKKKKSSSSSSSSSSS)

Comments

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Whynot
#1
So amazing!
bohubear
#2
Chapter 3: I will never understand and I will never try to do so. How can such a beautiful story that portrays the pain of a different person who is considered ugly and worthless, be hidden under the fake stories who only portray high school girls who swim in money and fall in love with an idiot who only knows what "beautiful"girls are meant to look like, making the main character want to be more beautiful. This one shot should be more known for its message it's far more important than those silly stories. I really loved it and I must say you are a good writer.
kehlin
#3
Wow, this story is amazing! Never thought about something like this >.<
I really enjoyed reading it! ^^
lalaville
#4
Wow. I'm speechless :)
Love this
xdreammerx
#5
o.O 1st comment. hehes.<br />
Omo that was an intense story. Dark but meaningful & thought-provoking.<br />
Awwh Jaejoong died:( But then did Jin get her freedom eventually? o.o<br />
Unlike any other fic I've read!:) Hwaiting!^^