Chapter 1: You're pretty good in French ! I loved the plot and Ommmmmmmmmg, the place and story were perfect, good job ! Baekai is such my fav otp hgegekhgjhejg <fangirling ok..
otherwise i'm fluent in French and the translations are quite great, but in french you can't tell " tu es très chaud" if you want to say to someone else that he's fine and looks hot.. It's like i'm telling that you're warm.. Or that your body is warm..it's about sensation not physical aspect ! You'd rather say " tu es vraiment beau gosse.", i think in english it's " you're very attractive" which is more used in France ! Except that fact ( and the little fault, " tu est" there's no "t" ) IT'S AWWSOME. I hope it will help you ! THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY.
Yaaah DAEBAK!! HAHAHA.. i liked it very much! ;) It's so funny that KAI looses the painting and that he can't resist Baekhyun - Well, let's be honest, would most of you be able to resist him? Hmm.. i don't think so! XD Anyways, FIGHTING! * ~
Chapter 1: LOVE IT! There's so many kissing and I really love that part! It's funny how Jongin can't resist kissing Baekhyun when they are in the middle of a chase. And hey, I learned French! The plot is unique and I so so love it. Overall, it is funny, witty, exciting, engaging and fluffy. Thumbs up for it.
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