[Review]Wedding Dress:SWNRS23

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Title (with link): Wedding Dress

 

 

Author: SWNRS23

 

 

Rated: No

 

 

Characters: Ok Taecyeon, Kim Myungsoo, Jung Jinwoon, Bae Suzy and Park Jiyeon 

 

 

Description: 

About finding your first love and going through the ups and downs of it.

 

 

Reviewer: LCV_things

 

 

 

 

Title: 2/5

 

I can see how the title is appropriate for how the story will end but I wish you had added something else to make it your own. Sadly I had to take points off because the criteria for this is uniqueness and there are 5 other stories with the exact same title. I suggest to change it (even if it’s slightly) so it can stand out more among the other stories when a search is made ;)

 

 

Graphics: 4/10

 

In my opinion this story has many good elements to pull from that would make a GREAT poster and the one you have right now just doesn't make it justice ;’( Also the background does not show any continuity with the poster and this I believe is something very important when you choose to put both on a story. So I hope in the future you can invest in a better poster and background so your story shines even more(*.*)  (~whispers~ request one ;)

 

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-caas-
#1
Hi. I'm starting a shops list and I want to add your shop :
Can you pls complete this form and put it in the comments box for this link?

Author's name:
Author's link:
Co-authors:
Created:
Status:
Banner's link:
Shop's Title:
Shop's link:
Shop genre:
Description:
Author's Note:
Info you want to add:
Services/Packs/posters/trailers exp:

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/802501/dream-city-shops-list-graphic-poster-trailer-advertise-shop-layouts-reviewer
Chanti12
#2
Chapter 33: Thanks a lot! I really like it! :)
Shibalyo #3
Chapter 32: Oh wow! I never expected a review this amazing! O.O Thank you so so much! Wow! Can't believe it's going to get featured! *tears* I'm so glad you could enjoy it :D I hope all my readers will feel the same way.

I was afraid that my plot might be too complicated for people to understand as a supernatural/fantasy genre and your comment was kind of expected hehe. So far my readers have been pretty understanding and have been taking everything in so I'm just waiting for those few people who would maybe find my plot to difficult to comprehend. The 'alternate world' and its processes were all essential to my plot and its eventual outcome so I guess I can't please everyone :|

And you're right in that I skip things a lot. A lot of aspects of my story get cut off and left unexplained but it's all relevant and will come up in the future. I'll take your comment into consideration and try not to leave them too abruptly so as not to confuse readers.

Again, thank you so much LCV and I'm so happy that you'll continue reading my fic. ^^
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#4
Chapter 31: Thank you so much for the poster! i really really like it! I SWEAR!
Chanti12
#5
I've requested a poster for my second story to KpopperMania :)
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#6
requested!!!! <3
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#7
Requested! <3
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#8
requested!!! <3
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#9
requested!!! <3
SWNRS23 #10
Just requested :)