[Review]Where My Demons Hide:bubbleteacups

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Title (with link): Where My Demons Hide

 

Author: bubbleteacups


Rated: Yes


Characters/ships: Taemin, Kai, Kyungsoo, Minho, Shinee, Exo, Taekai, Kaisoo, 2min


Description: 
Kai is determined to ruin whoever is to be blamed for Kyungsoo's death. But when he does find Taemin, his determination is put to test especially when Taemin is already a broken excuse of a human being. Is it possible to crumble a person's soul when there is so little to begin with?

Set in a futuristic, magicbonded, roman-slavemasteric AU with twisted societal values and expectations. 

 

Reviewer: luluhunnie

 

 

Story Title: 4/5

The title is pretty unique with only two other stories having the same name or a variation of the name! I would like to see just how the title relates to the story more though.

 

Graphics: 8/10

I think the poster could've been a tad bit darker to really signify the genre of angst, especially since it is a rather sad story. The poster is beautiful though but I wish it portrayed more of Kai's fury/anguish and Taemin's submissive nature if you know what I mean. I also wished the pictures for the background were a bit bigger because it was a tad distracting at first but it does fit the story well!

 

Foreword/Description: 6/10

The description of the story is great! It's short and catches my attention, compelling me to read the story. The foreword, however, seems almost unnecessary (at least the second paragraph anyway). I think the second paragraph gives too much information about the situation with Kai and Taemin. Forewords/Descriptions are meant to be rather vague; they shouldn't reveal too much nor too little information. I can already pretty much guess what's going to happen between Taemin and Kai

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-caas-
#1
Hi. I'm starting a shops list and I want to add your shop :
Can you pls complete this form and put it in the comments box for this link?

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Chanti12
#2
Chapter 33: Thanks a lot! I really like it! :)
Shibalyo #3
Chapter 32: Oh wow! I never expected a review this amazing! O.O Thank you so so much! Wow! Can't believe it's going to get featured! *tears* I'm so glad you could enjoy it :D I hope all my readers will feel the same way.

I was afraid that my plot might be too complicated for people to understand as a supernatural/fantasy genre and your comment was kind of expected hehe. So far my readers have been pretty understanding and have been taking everything in so I'm just waiting for those few people who would maybe find my plot to difficult to comprehend. The 'alternate world' and its processes were all essential to my plot and its eventual outcome so I guess I can't please everyone :|

And you're right in that I skip things a lot. A lot of aspects of my story get cut off and left unexplained but it's all relevant and will come up in the future. I'll take your comment into consideration and try not to leave them too abruptly so as not to confuse readers.

Again, thank you so much LCV and I'm so happy that you'll continue reading my fic. ^^
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#4
Chapter 31: Thank you so much for the poster! i really really like it! I SWEAR!
Chanti12
#5
I've requested a poster for my second story to KpopperMania :)
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#6
requested!!!! <3
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#7
Requested! <3
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#8
requested!!! <3
YeonZyNaSuYoonAra
#9
requested!!! <3
SWNRS23 #10
Just requested :)