Chapter 1: uhm its nice... but u should really take care the writing display..
Its really bad to read it on laptop..
Its not comfort to read coz I have to move the slide bar on my laptop to read it because the paragraph too long.

but the story is niceu :D

Chapter 1: Ah, Imma glad to found someone else who also likes him too! >< I like it! <3 I imagining that he sing 'why so serious' and dancing with the ladle... that must be so funny XD
please write more about this awesome rapper kkk~

Chapter 1: It's good! Keep it up!(;

WOOOOWW 1ST TIME FIND FF WITH IKJE!! OH GWAD... UPDATE JUSEYOOO UPDATE XD