Milo Ais Limau Ais

Description

Hanya mahu dikenali sebagai Sherry, gadis ini tidak berputus asa mencari cinta.. Memulakan hidup di kolej yang baru, dia nekad untuk mencari cinta baru setelah dikecewakan. Kris hadir tanpa jemputan, mencuba untuk mengisi ruang hatinya. Mampukah Sherry menerima kehadiran Kris yang berbeza kepercayaannya, kuat perasan dan kaki buli?

Foreword

Hello everyone!

This is bobbydobby, attempting of writing a Malay fanfiction.

I'm definitely a Malaysian and I'm pretty sure my Malay because I use English most of the time (I mean, in writing)

This is my very first Malay fanfiction which contains a lot of merapu and absurd sentences (I deeply apologize)

I'm still improving both of the languages, especially my mother tongue.

If you have any build up comments, please kindly drop it at the comment section and if you're shy, please inbox me so I can improve this :)

Sorry lah foreword terkeluar English... sebab tak reti sangat dah nak express (look, i'm using english word) macam mana feeling (again -_-) dapat tulis fanfic Malay. Dulu selalu jugak tulis cerpen. (SPM dulu tulis cerpen kot..cerpen yang entah apa-apa actually.) tapi skills (and again..english word) tu macam dah tersangat rusty. HAHA. 

Akhir kata, selamat membaca dan komen yang membina adalah sangat dialu-alukan. :) 

Have a nice day :)

Comments

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GreenDecember #1
Chapter 1: Hahaha...i like this story, biasanya sy nie jenis yg jarang bc kalu ada oc...
ekanorsyafiqah
#2
Chapter 1: Haha. Best la ff nie. saya tak berhenti2 ktwa XD. Lawak !!!!
Nursyuhada
#3
Chapter 1: wow ! such a wonderful story :D

good job author-nim
myza_inspirit
#4
Chapter 1: una~ i'm so jealous with u la.. trust me, ur language is much more better than me.. kedua-dua bahasa aku kot.. cerita yg sgt awesome! kalo buat novel aku beli, haha XD
barooya #5
Chapter 1: Omg tak habis2 tepuk peha sendiri sebab gelak... sy x minat sgt baca oc but ni serius best sgt!!!!!! T.T

But.... lol sejak bila jadi I U pulak ni xD hehehe
barooya #6
Is this going to be a crack fic? Kalau awak pernah baca ada sorang author buat crack bts, lawak sangat!
infiniteLement #7
Chapter 1: It's so weird when I read 'menjulingkan mata' Then I know it is 'roll eyes' xD
exo97bts
#8
lol una!!!!funneh habis weyyy!!!gi bunuh dri skrg sbb this story is so you!!it screams "unaaaaaaa" to me!wakaka .. yes, ur malay kinda .. no worries!you're not alone!wakakaka .. nk jgak letak elemen bts kn??lol~


overall .. ak bg 3.5/5 laa .. tp citer nie mmg best!nnt ak whatsapp ko utk komen membina ekk .. hehehe~~
sleepingmins
#9
Chapter 1: Alhamdulillah xD unnie, this is my first ever malay fic i finish! Sumpah fluffy & sumpah lawak hahaha poyo doh kris xD good job!
Fanfan_Galaxy94
#10
Hahaha~ Comel la citer ni~ Btw, part Kris ckp "Alhamdulillah" tu..tetiba teringat kat my Chinese ^_^ friend!