You're not what I Remembered.

Description

Memories of time since past flashed in no particular order through her mind as she wrung her hands together in itchy wool gloves. This particular part of the city was always beautiful in the stillness, no other human inhabitants to destroy her solace as time continued to crawl past her into the darkening Georgia night. Sigh gave way to sigh as she thought back to several months ago, the last interaction she thought they would ever have.

 

Foreword

This story is the most captivating narrative of young love since Romeo & Juliet. Pages have not seen how words can express such deeply nourishing narratives of the heart. These two bottom barrel lovers, have been swimming in the -piss of life waiting for the liberating aroma of leakage (if you catch my drift). Imminent_Change93's narrative is the most successful contemporary image of true culturally sound love. She has mastered the art of building character as well as developing story lines that vividly portray everyday struggles. However, she goes a step further by providing us with an emotional appeal unlike any other.

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Lotuspassion #1
Chapter 3: That's area,really creepy
Baebaegopa #2
Chapter 3: Why would you do that?!? These cliffhangers aren't funny. Damn , what does he mean by he intends to?
Baebaegopa #3
Chapter 2: Ohhhkay, your story makes me want this to be a novel. It seems so chill and relaxing, yet there's conflict, that is not fully unearthed. The fact that it's so poetically formed makes you forget there's a problem and it makes you get lost in the emotion. Your writing style is different and artistic. I don't know how it will proceed, but I hope it goes well. I'll definitely wait for more. (Hope this helps for feedback)
Baebaegopa #4
Chapter 1: This is beautiful. When I read the foreward My first reaction was, Okay now this story better live up to this description. But it does. I haven't come across writing like this In a while. I get the feeling you are a writing major...if not, look into it.
Lotuspassion #5
Chapter 2: I love this story
Lotuspassion #6
Update soon please