Chapter 1: Aye Jimin. He is such an idiot for not realising (/=^=)/ but at least she knows now.
Anyways, again, just simple grammar errors ^^

Chapter 1: woooow jimin oppa is so scary but sweet in the end

Chapter 1: Wow it kinda scared me in the beginning thay he chose the girl that was his before. This makes him sounded pathetic (he is, in a good sense). Wow T^T I love you, really. It's in 2nd pov.... gusta gusta

Chapter 1: Oh my God..Jimin.He was scary here but poor him though. T^T.. I thought why he was doing that to every girls that he made as his girlfriend every week.
anyway,I found this short story is good.. :D
I think this should have a sequel author-nim.Maybe what happen to Jimin after that..He was a bully..
Just my suggestion..Hehehe :D