Perfecting the imperfection

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PERFECTING THE IMPERFECTION 

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Be who you are, not who the world wants you to be.

In the process of finding our identity, we're going to end up lost.

 Everyone is broken in one way or another, some just more broken than the rest. 

Society demands impeccability and everyone is lost while trying to achieve it; they try to be what they were never meant to be and it makes them more screwed up.

It's an endless cycle .

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Kris Wu Yi Fan.

“There are only 3 kinds of people on earth that tell the truth. A child, a drunkard and a

dying man. Which are you? 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Son JiHye.

 

I'm tired of pretending! It is wrong for me to do so? Is it wrong for me to yearn

acceptance?Is it wrong for me to yearn love? I only want to be loved, accepted and

respected. Is that even wrong?  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Mark Tuan.

 You either make it or break it. There are no exceptions.

 

 

 

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Title: Perfecting the imperfection

 

Length:  One-shot 

 

Genre: Drama , Romance , Slice of life , Slight Angst

 

Characters: Kris, JiHye ( OC ), Mark , Naeun , JongIn

 

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About this story

Written for

Karma's Second Writing Contest

CFdorks' 12th Giveaway Ft Wu Yifan

Special thanks to ▶ k i m b a p ○ poster shop for the wonderful poster

This story would be written in First Point of view.

Date started: 6 / 05 / 14

Date Ended: 10 / 05 / 14

 

 

Author's note


Hello, I'm back with a slice of life story; a different genre from my usual angst stories. I would only begin this when my exams finish around end of April. I was sort of inspired by this presentation I did in English on Society; Fan_of_Karma's writing competition's prompts further helped me to develop this societal issue into a story that could convey my message . For those who read my blogs, they would know how much issues I have with our society. This is an issue I hold dearly to me, I understand the helplessness of trying to earn acceptance.

I'm a lost dreamer, we all are lost dreamers.

Let's take on the journey of the story of 3 young people, desperately hoping and trying to find their own identity in life's hierarchy.

 

 

 

anthealkl
Re-wrote the ending :)

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Ydvvfjkch #1
Chapter 1: taemin ❤️naeun❤️ kai
cece_mytlover
#2
Chapter 1: wow this story was deep and good :)
OppaJjang98 #3
Chapter 1: Woah!!! This story was .....perfect. I love it!!!
Fan_of_Karma
#4
Chapter 2: Good job! I really like the underlying message of the story! There were a couple of typos and grammatical errors, but nothing too horrid. And Mark's character was really pitiful :'(
jinjinjin
#5
Chapter 2: Loved it! I'm saying it again - everything was so... good! I like how you write! Please continue writing more in the future, I'll be looking forward to them. ^-^ Thanks for the great story! I don't regret reading it at all. :)
jinjinjin
#6
++ everything is just perfect! The poster, the bg, the descrip, the foreword, the story -- ugh just. For the first time in two years, I've never been so interested in a story before, let alone a slice of life kind of genre. I wish you good luck to the contest! I hope you win! You deserve it ♡
jinjinjin
#7
Chapter 1: Is that 'yuen mei'? XD
Sorry, my Chinese skills are a little rusty ^^;
Anyway, I super liked it! I would recommend it to people who likes these kinds of genres c:
Loved it! I think nothing was wrong. I liked Mark's character, even if he was a hoe to Jihye. Mark is just - just... conceited, selfish, but at the same time looks like he really cares about Jihye. It's really nice how he breaks down at the last part. I love his chara! And Kris... Mr. Galaxy hahaha I'm laughing right now! XD 3 years of crushing Jihye... omg. I would've confessed, however I know how weird and awkward it would be if he did. XD LOL And Jihye; I admire her bravery. White lies... just only hurt you in the end. I've learned a lot here! For the last time, I loved it! I'm going to wait for the epilogue :DDDD Thanks for the great story! Write more if you have time. :D
mingkhoo #8
hye.. this sounds good.. please update.. :)