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Paranormal Detective Agency 〈〈 apply closed 〉〉

〈 the psychic 002 〉 〈 the psychokinetic 002 〉 〈 the clairvoyant 002 〉 〈 the mind reader 001

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hana
sonyeotokki03 | the psychokinetic | accepted
 
hello! thank you for being my first applicant! don't worry about your english or anything; english isn't my first language either and even if it was, i don't think i would have minded since your application was still understandable! anyways, on to your application! edit: thank you for editing your application! i don't have any problems, so you are currently accepted!^^
thank you for applying~

 

 

 

 

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ae
goldenbee_story | the psychic | accepted
 
hello! edit: thank you for fixing the little things in your application! since i do not have any major complaints that'll keep you from accepted, your application has passed!^^ thank you for applying
 
 
 
 

 

 

 

 

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voltagebaby | the psychic | accepted
 
hello! wow, my first male character applicant! i actually don't have any complaints about your application because i enjoyed reading it! i thought the idea of his tarot card reading being a side business was rather nice and the fact that he was an indigo child was great! ah, for the detective's personality, jaeyoung is rather emotional and violent while hangil is rather vocal and ambitious (it'll show in their personalities during a teaser~). i don't really have anything else to say about your application since it was perfectly fine! thank you for applying~^^

 

 

 

 

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akijune | the mind reader | accepted
 
hello! okay, so i really don't have anything to say about your application besides omg. i honestly have no questions about your app because it was just that great! i think my favorite part is the questionnare where you answered how hangil & jaeyoung found her. i don't know why, but i found it rather.. cute?? cute isn't the correct word to use, but AHA. your love interest's ulzzang though. HNNNG. so yeah, i don't really have much to say about your app except the fact that you're accepted! thank you for applying~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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chunae
hiikyoung | the clairvoyant | accepted
 
hello! thank you for being my first clairvoyant applicant! well, i don't really have anything negative to say about your application but i enjoyed reading it! i do love her relationship with seungho, so yay! since i don't have much to say, thank you for applying!
 
 
 

 

 

 

 

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haejung
infinite_dreamer | the clairvoyant | accepted
 
hello! wow, haejung is... perfect. but, of course, it's not a big deal considering her background and i do enjoy how she came to understand her power! one thing i don't understand is how haejung published a book about clairvoyance while her father is the only one who knows of her power. it's not a big problem, but considering the fact that she's only nineteen, she doesn't have the "experience" and age that most doctors/scientists claim they have as they publish books similar to what haejung published. i don't mind the idea, but i would find it a lot more realistic if either a) a lot of people are sure haejung herself is a clairvoyant but since they don't have proof, they can't do much or b) haejung is out and open with everyone knowing she is a clairvoyant. other than that, i thought your application was lovely!
 
 

 

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mayakirana | the psychokinetic | accepted
 
hello! i thought you application was perfectly fine and rather nice to read! i do like how ara is more of the closed off type of person and had a lot of insecurities! "He is a student at Gwangju Police Academy and undoubtly handsome and mighty fine." i feel you, girl. i feel you. AHA. omg, i thought you were going to make changmin her love interest, so i was rather surprised to see soohyun! i do, however, like his role you made him!^^ thank you for applying!

 

 

 

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predilection
#1
Chapter 6: Woah the date is over already huh. Sorry authornim for the late response since I was enganged with somethimg else at the moment but now I'm free! Yay for that! Haha...anyway onto your question, I like all at one appearance so that people won't have the time to even expect. Hahaha but it's your choice really. So hwaiting!!!!
sonyeotokki03
#2
Chapter 6: hm i think revealing characters.... but teasers are just fine too. it's the author's choice ^^
voltagebaby
#3
Chapter 6: Good luck on the story author nim~^^ And I think revealing or showing each characters one by one is better, but it's up to author nim as the author~ ^^
Akijune
#4
Chapter 6: Ohhh one at a time can keep up the suspense but if you are busy, revealing all at the same time is fine too ^^
Pinksnwflk
#5
Chapter 3: I fix the app,
actually it wasn't about Clairvoyant, but it's like a novel based on her life as someone that has clairvoyant
hiikyoung
#6
Chapter 6: No worries about a 'false' update. Its informative. ^^ Its also helpful to keep the story at the top of the apply tag, and encourages more people to look at it and apply.

All at once!!! :D Unless you want to write more individualized teasers, then one or two at a time. ^^
predilection
#7
Chapter 5: Have you watch God's Gift: 14 Days? This kind of remind me of that. It would be awesome, like amazing if this killing things and The Phantom is actually a big plan of someone important behind the scene. Haha anyway can't wait for more teaser or maybe even chapter 1. Lalalala~
predilection
#8
Chapter 3: Thanks for the quick review. I'm glad that I don't have to wait longer than this because boy I am so excited about all this detectives thing. Haha~ Anyway...yeah kind of falls head over heel on Changmin after the Spellbound!! But not enough to make him the one. Wow what am I blabbering about over here? Okbye
predilection
#9
I applied! Hope to see the review soon^^
hiikyoung
#10
Chapter 5: Awww, don't fret! :( The people subscribed are the ones you want anyways. ^^

Oh goodness...the details of who the victims are sent a few chills down my spine. It seems so senseless. 13 victims, and the body builder just proves he is not picking 'weak' people.

I support you, even if you don't use Chunae. A good mystery/crime story is always appreciated! ^^