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This is you author-nim character. Hope you like her. ^.^ 

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Name: Jung Soohyun
Plotline:The Understimated
Love Interest:Oh Sehun
Username:Suau147


 

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This is your co-author-nim character. Give her lots of love ^.^  

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Name:Kwon Minjee
Plotline:The Loyal One
Love Interest:Kim Jongin
Username:Blackrose001
 

 

 

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Hi there! This is co-author writing at right now. At the moment, our author-nim can´t be here and she asked me to do the review. Let´s start then! Well...I´m sorry to say this, but you will be putted in the pending list right away, until you fix everything. You didn´t use the application form we gave you. We had lot of trouble to adjust the app form for our story and then you don´t use it... Also! Your personality and background are to short! You need to explore her personality more. Why does her ert side comes out lots of times? Why is she like a rockstar? You need to give us the whole information, if not, we won´t be able to figure the image that you have for her. Sure we did gave our ideas of how she´s supposed to be, but isn´t there that you wish to add and make your chracter more interesting and make us surprised? About your backgroun...it´s to short! Ok, her father is a famous gunleader that provided guns to the older guardians, and that he made a deal that you would become a guardian. She trained with guns all her life. Cool! She was ok being a guardian. Interesting! But still! There must be more stuff that happened in her life, no? For example, what happened to her mom? Is she alive or not? Spice up her background and personality. By the way, the relationship persona is what kind of relatonship do youwant to have with you love interest. a Love and hate? A lovey-dovey? A ert ralationship? You decide. It would be great if you also added more things to Chanyeol´s personality and the interaction between youtwo. Sorry if I sounded mean, but I just want you to not have any regrets and think that you could have done a much better application and I would be chosen. Well, either way, thanks for being ouur first applicant! Fix everything and then you will be accepted :)

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Name: Park Haru
Plotline: The Gunleader
Love Interest: Park Chanyeol
Username:caatchmeonfire

 

 

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Hi there! This is co-author writing ^^So....I liked your character! It was really interesting....There´s only some little problems...I really need you to givemore details in you personality. I think that it was lacking stuff that are essential.Also, I would you like to put in you background of how you become Baekhyun´s guardian and if she´s ok or not with being a guardian. I liked yours and Baekhyun´s relationship! It´s really interesting and I can imagine it easily! Well, for now I will put you in the pending list, but after you fix the little details, you will be accepted. Fighting!!

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Name:Kim Jinhee
Plotline:The spy
Love Interest:Byun Baekhyun
Username:-Ixhans
 

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liltaytay45
#1
Chapter 2: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/932832
Hope you still contiue with this applyfic it seems very exciting !
esmkseunmi94 #2
Chapter 1: hope you liked her, dont know if ur still applying! ^^

http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/930303
caatchmeonfire #3
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/836231

Here it is o/
i added as much as I could
caatchmeonfire #4
Chapter 1: i read your review :) let me correct it e ue
-lxhans
#5
Chapter 2: i have read your review ; w ;
first of all, thank you for that ♡
and i'll get on it! o u o
thank you, once again ♡
-lxhans
#6
Chapter 1: http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/833346

yehet! i have done it ; w ;
its actually early morning here and my mind is just asdfg- e w e
please do tell me if i missed something or if i need to change something ; w ;
caatchmeonfire #7
http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/834004

here it is OTL
im sorry for what i did before
caatchmeonfire #8
Chapter 1: I shall continue here tbh:
» FACECLAIMULZZANG NAME: ...
link one: http://sp8.fotolog.com/photo/24/43/50/ulzzangs/1265556487938_f.jpg
link two: http://31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lxdj5xVQYl1r64h2to1_400.jpg
link three: http://sp8.fotolog.com/photo/24/43/50/ulzzangs/1281563249957_f.jpg

» BACKUP FACECLAIMULZZANG NAME: ...
PICTURE LINKS: link one: http://exogirlsdaily.files.wordpress.com/2013/06/byun-ji-young-2.png
link two: http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac291/RiisaRiisa/Byun%20Ji%20young/ByunJiYoung50.jpg
link three.http://lyrisworld.files.wordpress.com/2013/05/tumblr_lxp4cdl9yd1rn3i3io1_400.png

Appearance & Style: She loves fashion but also she loves to look fierce, she likes black clothes the most
Casual:http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/img-set/BQcDAAAAAwoDanBnAAAABC5vdXQKFllURDRfd2t1UThfdEx5Q2tOZ0tXdHcAAAACaWQKAXgAAAAEc2l6ZQ.jpg
Formal: http://i01.i.aliimg.com/wsphoto/v0/619446213/2012-Fashion-new-y-lady-Evening-dress-Elegant-women-s-formal-dress-Prom-dress-Free-Shipping.jpg
Combats: http://img.poptower.com/pic-10965/kat-von-d.jpg?d=600
Sleepwear:http://blog.sleepyheads.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/hk316kit9-hello-kitty-play-white-cami-short-set.jpg

WHAT IS LOVEWE SPEND OUR LIVES SEARCHING FOR IT» THE BASICS
LOVE RELATIONSHIP PERSONA: ...
LOVE INTEREST: ...Chanyeol
BACKUP:...Baekhyun

STORY: ...(Tell us how did you meet each other): Chanyeol doesn't know that Haru is EXO's guardian just yet. He meet her in college where he always see her drawing, he'd often stick to her as he thinks shes some kind of loner and he thinks she's a good girl even when he finds out shes a guardian.
caatchmeonfire #9
Chapter 1: CHARACTER NAMEUSERNAME // NICKNAME // ACTIVE RATE (1-10)» PLOTLINE NAME:...
OTHER NAME:... Park Haru
NICKNAME: ... Bunny
DATE OF BIRTH: ...03/16/1993
AGE: ...21
PLACE OF BIRTH: ...Busan, SouthKorea.
ETHNICTY:...Korean,
BLOOD TYPE:...A+
HOMETOWN: ...Busan
LANGUAGE:...Korean, English and Chinese.


» PERSONALITY
As I choose the gundealer to be my character, I've decide her to be much like a rockstar, she loves to wear leather pants and rides a motorcycle(?), she has a erted side that comes out a lot, she's not afraid to speak her mind even though it may get her in trouble all the time, she acts dorky but she's very smart in fact.

When she's comfortable enough she may show a sweet side, she also likes to attend parties but it doesn't mean she doesn't like to be culturized, in fact she loves to read, especially if it's gun-related. She's also addicted to coffee and likes to draw as her frustrated dream was to become a tattoo artist.

» BACKGROUND
She is the daughter of the most respected gundealer in south korea, and he was the one that provided the guns to the older guardians. His father made a deal that once you were old enough you'd be one of the guardians and he'd keep providing the guns when needed.

She grew up being trained about guns, but she doesn't have many child memories as she was always training. She found out she was going to be a guardian since she was a child and surprisingly she was - and is - okay with that.

Likes:
Guns, books, food, pororo (when alone) and coffee

Dislikes:
watch tv, rude people, teletubbies because theyre scary, gold color and salads.

Fears:
crockroaches, planes, heights, being alone and dogs.

Hobbies:
Internet (tumblr), spend time at a bookstore, cooking , dance and paint.

Habits:
Crack her fingers, her bottom lip, scratch her right arm, rub her cheeks a little and drink coffee every morning.
-lxhans
#10
Chapter 1: the plotines are interesting!
i shall apply o u o
wait a bit, jusey0 ♡