Behind The fan Service

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What will happen when kai start developing feelings for a certain hyung ; how is it gonna end is he gonna accept those feeling and confess or 

“I’m not as fans think of me I was not the God or the typical play boy of the group or even gay I was straight shy guy till that day ”

Foreword

Heeeeey everyone it’s been long time since I write something I had been going through really bad days but I managed to write this and another HunHan one shot that I’m gonna post later so anyway ummm I wanted to say that the characters are not mine  but the story is mine if there was accidently any story like mine please inform me and I say again its purely a coincidence and yeah another thing English is not my native language but it’s my major though and please and errors ideas or feedback inbox me thanks lot and please enjoy 

 

 


 

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shawolcassiopeian #1
Chapter 3: Omg hahhahaahha this is hot as fire
bbvipyb #2
Chapter 1: you have some grammar/spelling errors but i really enjoyed it. so adorable~
ChoiKimNa #3
Chapter 1: Aaaaaaaaaa why so sweet,cute,n lovely......

hrheheh good job
IAmAnExoFan #4
Chapter 1: The title is perfect for the story and I think that your plot is really cute but your story lacks punctuation marks.

It's kinda confusing when you read something continously when it should have already stopped..

You should also capitalize names (ex. kai)

One more thing is that you have a tendency to shorcut the words (you > U) and while it may be cute for other, some readers will just be irritated. Fix that along with grammatical errors here and there and I swear, this story will be better.

Good luck author-nim! ^^
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