Kyungsoo is losing his interest towards Jongin. He thinks Jongin is only a kid who suffocates him and his life. He must find something new to spark his love again, or maybe someone new.
Chapter 1: hello, it's @ai_baobei a.k.a. amy ^^
ah tbh i really, really, really don't like kyungsoo's character here like i don't like infidelity or the mere idea of it so kyungsoo in this fic just ugh. but that's not a bad thing on you, since you, well, meant to make him this way. i'm just saying that ugh kyungsoo in this fic tbh u_u
i can help with grammar if you'd like, but since you didn't ask me to, i won't bring it up.
idk tbh i don't like cheating fics or the mere idea of it, but i am glad that kyungsoo came ot his senses :)
i agree with the other commenter that kyungsoo's mind changed fast too ;o;
for a first fic though, this is pretty good! my first fic was so, so awful omg
best of luck writing in the future :D i hope to see more from you!
Chapter 1: hy i am @Randy_Aprizal on twitter you suggested me to read yours, hope u could remember. hehe
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well, i love the story and I wasnt expect that kyungsoo would change his mind as fas as that. i thought that he would cheating on jongin or stuff. and btw i dont know who's doo joon actually so i decided to googled it. lol
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well ur story just be my fairy tale at this midnight. i always read fanfiction at least one every single night. hehe
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and btw i cant comment anything about grammars because english is not my first language.
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and hope u can understand what i've said and good luck for the next fanfiction as long as it's still kaisoo ill read it. lol
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