The Story of My Life by Lovebisous and weareangels

The story of my life, years of being bullied turned my heart into a block of ice. Losing friends, making new ones, and still be that nerdy girl that no one likes. I secretly admire the boys I like, but I know that they wouldn't like me. They could melt my heart and my heartbeats faster every time I talk to them, and they know it.

Annyeong! ^^

Today I will be reviewing The Story of My Life by Lovebisous and weareangels per request of the author. This is a school fanfic, but not in the way that we usually think. So far at least, it has been in an elementary school setting, starting with Kindergarten.

THE BREAKDOWN: 

Pros: 
-Super Cute
-Adorable
-Good grammar (very important lol)
-Has quite a bit of drama (which I like)
-Pretty good attempt at channeling of a elementary schoolers personality

Cons: I think that the story could be developed better. Everything goes a bit fast. It's also a bit cheesy (in like a cute way), but some people like that, so I won't hold that against it. The plot, is not continuos, each grade seems to have a different dramatic thing happening, and the characters are rather flat.  I really do love the drama in it though ^^

CONCLUSION:

I think that this fanfic is a bit of a hit or miss. If yo