Endless Goodbyes

Description

          "Hello , I see you came back"

          "Yup , I merely could not avoid this scenery." He chuckled gracefully , he remained the most stunning creature that I'd ever laid sight on.

          "I'm Kim Jaejoong" he reached his fragile hand out to me , I shook it without batting an eye.

          "I'm........" wait who am I? All this time and I never stop to think who I am. How could I not know my name ? What the hell is going on with me?

           " I'm ...... I don't know who I am"

           " I know you don't" he whispered .

Foreword

          "It's a lovely day isn't it?" The angelic man beside me spoke , his voice suited that attractive face of his. I nodded .      

          "Yes it is......."I looked over to him , he smiled .

          "It's just like that day"

          "What do you mean?"I stared at him confused , what day could he possibly be talking about? His silence pushed my curiosity further , he still kept his smile , not once did it waver.

           " Last Tuesday , it was as nice as today" duh , I mentally faced palmed at my over thinking brain , what else could he have meant?

           " Why yes , it was" the two of us didn't utter a word after that , we just sat there admiring nature's perfect scenery. A sudden vibration in my pocket indicated I received a message.

             

                From: Unknown

                      I'm sorry ........ I miss you.

 

          Huh? I guess someone has the wrong number. Ignoring the text I glimpsed next to me wanting to catch another look at the man next to me but, he had vanished . Almost like he was never there.

SuJuelfcassshawol
I came to the conclusion that I should add another 2 or 3 chapters to this fic. I'm not sure when I'll update , however I am working on them.

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JejeKyu
#1
Chapter 2: next story please...
i just found it really interesting :D i subs it!^^
Tomutionmyha
#2
Chapter 1: I was grabbed by the eerie feel of the story, it very sad but compelling. I want to know more like who killed them and why? And will Changmin and Jae be at peace now that Changmin remembers he is dead? Still I'm glad this wasn't a long story it would have been more heart breaking! Thanks for sharing Author-nim!
autumn_desire
#3
Chapter 1: I am really confused..
shinee4ever1 #4
Chapter 1: Write about the honeymoon M!!!!!!awesome story put M on your next story MMM!!!!!!!
Spirit_Queen24
#5
Chapter 1: Im a little bit scared to read the whole thing so i just skimmed for now sinceim alsoin school and als read the comments to see what happened and its rly sad
StarrySeraphim21
#6
Chapter 1: Beautiful story but I'm a little confused.
Is Changmin the speaker of the story and the one who died is Yunho?
yunjaejo #7
Just WOW..I never have guessed what was happening until I finished reading your story. I'm not a fan of angst..but your writing style is really good!
searchingmyself
#8
Chapter 1: you made me speechless..... really beautiful!!!
love it<3