Confetti - I

Confetti

Darkness snickers. You step, stride, stumble into its embrace.

 

Light seeping from the doorway is like a yellow furred dog,

barking at shadows scurrying behind the legs of chairs,

squeezing between couch cushions.

 

The front door shuts. The barking ceases. 

 

Your heart beats in your feet, vibrating floorboards.

The room is cool but you sweat,

anticipating the cold clutch of claws sinking into your arm.

 

This is not the living room you remember.

 

Hesitatingly, you call for those you know,

their names lost in blinding black.

Where are they? Where are you?

 

Darkness knows you are alluringly alone.

 

Your eyes squint, the faint outlines of the couch a meaty arm,

waiting to place you in a choke hold.

the television a toothless gaping mouth, waiting to devour you.

 

You can hear the light whining behind the door, wanting to be let in.

 

You’re backing backwards; hoping you hit the door’s edge.

A fleshy wall causes you to tr-tri-trip.

You trample on another pair of toes.

 

The stranger’s breath is a howling wind ready to sweep you off your feet.

 

You nervously gasp, the stranger wrapping an arm around your waist.

You think your skin will puncture, bleed,

but the fingers are pudgy instead of sharp, pressing into your stomach.

 

The room suddenly illuminates, shadows leaping from behind the couch. 

 

“SURPRISE!” The shadows shout, throwing party poppers and streamers in your face.

You squeal at the burst of licorice reds, poppy yellows, and tickle me pinks.

Familiar plump lips peck your cheek. A whisper lingers in your ear:

 

“Happy birthday, Kibummie.”

 

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Jinkeyk
#1
Chapter 4: That was really beautiful. Thank you for this. ?
Mayoochez
#2
woah really this is so niceeeeeee ,i love it oh my i want to say something but yeah you your story just beautiful okay <3
Eyagibba
#3
Chapter 4: *tear* i loved it!
Elfshawols4ever
#4
Omggg, so nicee!!!!
__taeba13y
#5
OH My GOD... Beautiful ending... :') Beautiful Story... *o*<br />
I LOVE..LOVE...LOVE this story okay... ♥♥ So Much... ♥♥<br />
I really wanted to quote my fave line.. But then I might end up quoting the entire chapter.. xD<br />
Everything is just perfect... ONKEY would be Proud having you writing them Amazing Stories... :D<br />
I'll be looking forward to your next ONKEY.. I bet it'll be just as Awesome.. ♥♥♥<br />
And You definitely should go to some Publisher.. Because You should be Paid with this kind of Awesomeness... ^o^<br />
bitnaneunonkey
#6
Gah my heart skipped a beat :O
91yuKey
#7
Can i just say that i love it??yes,i love it..kyaaaa >.< update again ne..^-^ *speechless*
__taeba13y
#8
Gosh... Why are you so amazing?? O.O<br />
I really wanted to write a long comment about how beautiful this is but I'm still a bit speechless and awestruck.. *O* But I'm gonna try anyway....^^v<br />
I Love this story so much.....♥ You heard that a lot, but I can't stop myself.. Your Writing is just mind blowing.. I'm kinda sure you might be a published writer who goes all ninja writing fanfic on your free time... ;D<br />
Poor Jinki though.. :p He must've really meant what he had written.. Maybe hoping a dramatic reaction from Key, instead got laughed at.. :(<br />
Kibum is thinking about something else..... xD (Onew's lips) haha :D<br />
Aigoo... My Shippering heart is happy... Thanks to you... Thanks for the update!!! ♥<br />
But I need more... So, update soon?? ^-^<br />
91yuKey
#9
Auw...auw..auw... Sweet Cheesy Clumsy Jinki... :)
whatisyixing
#10
“Wish for me. I can moisten your lips longer than any expensive lipstick.”<br />
“I can give you a trip to my heart. It’s free, the temperature warm all year round.”<br />
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my favorite parts. ahhh, cheesy Onew is love ! <br />
really cute & sweet :'))<br />