Flicker

Description

This is the story of he and she, their mask of anonymity perfected in their relationship — strangers.

Foreword

She could be your every day average girl; the girl on the other side of the street or the neighbour’s daughter. The florist too maybe, or the sister of your best friend. Her identity is left completely up to you.

 

He may be the typical kid, the butcher’s son or the sibling of a construction worker. The ace of the baseball team; the quietest in his rowdy gang. His identity is also a clean slate.

 

Come, and bequeath your eyes with this piece of intended ambiguity.

 

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You are the face in the crowd that I cannot forget.

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YuxieWuxie #1
Chapter 1: Wow, just WOW. This is amazing. This was refreshing and a very pleasant reading. I loved everything and though I am not a huge fan of open endings, this was just perfect. Congratulations on another beautiful work. :*
Pinguwinguaggywaggy #2
Chapter 1: This is a great message! ;u; You are PRO! XD
fragment_ #3
Chapter 1: i really really really liked this. & the weird thing is, even though we never get any names or any 'real' description about the two leads, while reading this, the leads slowly grew faces in my head & before i knew it, they had become actual people in my head. it was really beautiful & i'm really glad that i read this.
sweetcutepeach #4
Chapter 1: Awww this was really.... touching. I just love this short story. I hope to find people that inspire me to become a better person. Sigh/ this was a good read :)
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