Honeymoon [last part - EVERYBODY]

Dont leave me !!!

I planned to update it soon but i dont have time ^^ . sorry for the late . Hope u guys still remember me. one more thing i have another fanfic call " FAKE MARRIAGE"  if you havent read it go check out this link >>>>>>>> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/721909/     thank you so much 
Now let enjoy the chapter ^^




Chanhee's POV
We had some great time here except some bad time . Changhyun seem better now . Great thing is Jonghyun always stay by his side . He got better coz of him i guess . My Omma want them to get married as soon as possible . She said " you guys should make another great family so i can have grandchild soon" with a big smile . I dont know why but my face become redder and redder
"Come on Channie . I didnt mention u . Why u need to be that shy? Everyone know that u guys had some great night together" she is teasing
"No ~ we..." I 'm really shy now. Really really
"Come on. It's not your fault. The wall of that hotel are too thin. We will lend other hotel next time " she said
"Omma stop teasing him. He will cry " my baby is now hugging me
"Look !!!! He is talk back for him. Lee Byunghun you are really look like human now" everybody laugh coz of her joking
"Minhee yaa~ stop teasing them" my Appa said
"Appa~ you are jjang" Byunghun said with a thumb up for his Dad
"Ok~ so today a last day here so we need to make it become the best day ever. Let make some memories now" my Appa said . With that everybody run to the beach. Play with water , sand and the sunshine . That was great morning ever. After long time play with water we went back to the hotel to changed clothes then having lunch at the hotel restaurant.
"Aigoo~ next year when we go to another trip i wish we have more member . Niel ya~ find a partner soon. U are the only one alone here" my Omma said
"Aunt ~ u really have to slap at my face like that. I'm so sad here " then he fake crying
"Dont cry should i introduce u with some girl ? Or u like boy more?" Byunghun said
"I prefer boy but girl is ok " Niel said still crying ofc it's fake
"Ok ok ~ let's eat . We have a lot of thing to do in the afternoon" my appa said
I look on my left side Byunghun is eating his foods now. I didnt think that i'll have this happy family and this great life . On my right is Omma and Appa. I'm so lucky that they found me and Changhyun so we can have this happy . In front of me are Changhyun and Jonghyun. They are feeding each other. Changhyun is now smiling after all bad things he had gone throught. He is really a strong man even he has a small body. Just by look at his smile make me feel happy . And Niel is sitting next to Jonghyun. He is a funny boy if he wasnt here, we couldnt have this great time . I wanna say thank you and i also wanna cry now . I'm so touch now coz of everything that i have now . At that time there is a hand touching my hand and hold on it really tight. That's my baby. He is now looking into my eyes with a smile small on his face. He know how to calm me down. Thank you , Byunggie ahh~~~

Byunghun's POV
Lunch time was end with a great atmosphere.
"So what do u guys wanna do now? The flight is in the evening " My Appa said
"I wanna have some sleep . I stayed up late last night. I think i'll go back to my room " Niel said
"Ok ~ go now baby" my Omma said while patting his
"We will go shopping . U wanna come with us Channie Hyung?" Jonghyun said
"Oh~ Byunggie are u tired? Do u wanna go?" My baby said. Im tired now but look at his eyes i know he wanna spend sometime with his belove Changhyunie
" it's ok . We can go " i said
" ok so u guys go shopping we will go to spa " Omma said
"Ok so Mommy and Daddy have a great time . We are leaving now " Jonghyun said then Changhyun kiss my Omma on her cheeks make her smile brightly

*in the mall a few hours later*
"Wow~ there is alot of great thing here . Should we buy family shirt?" Jonghyun said
"Oh~ that's great. Same style but different color for each couple " I said
"Wait ~ we should buy the same color since Niel is single now . Dont make him feel sad" my belove Channie is so sweet now
"Yeah~ Channie Hyung is right. We should buy the same style and color" Changhyun said
"Ok so what color should we buy? Purple?pink?blue?red?yellow? Black?white?"
"I think yellow and blue are all cute . So Mommy,Channie Hyung, Niel Hyung and Changhyun will wear yellow one . Daddy, Byunghun Hyung and me will wear blue one. Is it ok? "
Jonghyung said
"Should we change yellow into pink?" Changhyun said
"Pink is too much . I think yellow is ok " Channie said
"Oh~ it's fine with me . So we will buy yellow" Changhyun said again
"Ok let's buy if now then go back it's almost the time for dinner" i said

*in the hotel room*
Niel's POV
I wonder what is he doing now? Is he still think abt Channie Hyung? He is sad again. I cant forget his sad face and eyes. I just wanna be there for him but after all i'm nothing to him. Just a new friend who knew some secret. When i know abt it suddently i feel awkward in front of Channie Hyung. Actually i'm not sleepy at all i just dont wanna face Channie Hyung . There is uncomfortable feeling when he is around. What's wrong? He is really a great and sweet guy. Is it because of Minsoo Hyung? Do i like him? No no no ofc not. How can it like that? He is just friend and his problem is his problem . Aishhh~ why i have to think abt him and care abt him this much huh? Even now i wanna call him. Niel ya~ just try not to make a mistake......

Minsoo's POV
I had a dream abt Chanhee like always but the difference is this time there is somebody hold me tight and warm me up after Chanhee left. I dream abt Chanhee run away from me in the midnight everyday since the day he got married . I should wish them happy and forget abt him . Minsoo yaa~ u saw the way they look at each other, u know how much it hurt when the ppl u love got hurt in front of u . U can see how hurt Byunghun was when he carring Chanhee in his hands and rushed to the hospital. U know it's well so just give up. I should go back to Seoul and keep being his Hyung forever . One better person will come to me someday ....

*at hotel restaurant*
Changhyun's POV
Everybody look so happy now . And i'm feeling better just by looking at them . My belove family. Channie Hyung now can have a great life without anything to worried abt anymore. He tried hard for my sake for 5 years, it's time for him to take some rest. I keep staying in my own world untill somebody squezz my hand.
"Are u ok? U are tired ?"
"No i'm not . Just thinking"
i smile brightly at him. My Jonggie is really know how to comfort me. I'm happy that he is here with me and i wanna say thank you coz he accepted me after all things that i went throught. I still wanna clean myself everyday and i also have nightmate everynight. But each time Jonghyun always hold me tight in his arms then tell me "i'm here for you just cry so you will feel better" . It's just a simple sentence but it have an important meaning for me. I feel better coz of that .
"U wanna go to our room ? " he asked again with a worried face
"No it's ok, i'm fine . Thank u for everything"
"Why u need to say thank u. I'm the one who need to say thank u instead. Thank you for accepted me "
he whisper and i just smile
"Hello !!! Can u guys stop that thing ? I cant eat. Please can you guys think abt a single like me???" Niel Hyung said why crying . of course he 's not really crying 

"ok ok mianhaeyo Hyung we will stop now" i said then turn to Jonghyun 

"we should stop now Jagiya" then kiss his cheeks

"are you kidding me ?? since when u become like that Changhyunie??" Niel Hyung scream again and everybody laugh. We were end our dinner with alot of laugh then head to our room to prepared our stuff to go back to Korean . We had a great vacation . there were bad thing happened to me but at least now i had the one who i love the most and he love me more than everything. even my wound cant be recovered that easy but i'll try and Jonghyun will be here for me i know it. He is now putting our stuff into suitcase . i feel really happy and warm just by looking at his back. i come closer then backhug him while whipser

"thank you for everything . i love you , Jonggie" then bring my face closer to his neck ,enjoy his scent. he was suprised at first then touch my hand and hold it tight in his hand

"i love you too baby" we stay in that position for good 5mins then he turn around, hug me tight

"let's get married after we graduated . is it ok ?"

"so this is how u proposed?? can you do it more romamtice?" i smile at him 

"sorry but ......." he look at me with sad eyes.. i cant bring myself to anymore

"i know i know . my answer is YES OF COURSE " after that he bring his lips to mine then kiss me passionately which make me feel i'm the most lucky guy in this world...............

 

Byunghun"s POV

"Jagiya~ should we wear family t-shirt now ??" my baby said

" should i call them ???" 

"nae ~ you should do it "

"Omma ~ we will wear family shirt now is it ok?.................................nae ~ i"ll call the other . have you done ?............................ok ~ so we wil meet each other in the hall 2 hours later "

"does she wanna wear it ?"

"yeah~  they will. i"ll call Niel . you call Changhyun ok ?"

"Nae"

After done pack up evrything , Channie went to shower and i'm here lying on the bed and think abt everything . My biggest secret is already found out by him . he is so so sweet. whenever he saw  my scars he will cry . i dont know what to do if he keep seeing it . i told him that i'll cover it with long sleeves again but he didnt let me do that. He said if i do that he will feel more hurt. my baby is really worried abt me . this honeymoon is really great . we had our first sweet night together , we cried together , laugh together and went throught alot of things together. i wont never let's go of him even he wanna go i'll hold him back . i can even knees down and begging him to stay with me.

"i'm done. it's your turn Byunggie" he voice wake my up 

"come here Yeobo" i said while look at him . suddently i wanna hug him . he wont dissapeared after i take a shower right?

'i"m here . what happened???" he is now hugging me wiht my head is on his tummy

"suddently i feel like i'll lose you . i don know why '

'dont be like that . i won tgo anywhere . i"ll always be here wih you . i promise" he said while kiss the top of my head 

"yeah~ u are right u cant get away from me . u cant" with that we stay in that position for a long time then i went to take a shower

 

*In the plane*

Niel's POV

"why i have to sit alone ??? i sat with Changhyun when we came here ?" i pouted

"coz now u are the only one who is single here . how can i let's my baby sit with u Hyung???" Jonghyun said 

"come on son . you are not little boys anymore dont make noise like that . Niel go back to your seat now and next time if you dont wanna sit alone bring a partner " Uncle said

" even you are teasing me now Uncle" 

"no i'm not . should i change the seat for u? u want this old man sit alone there?" he said 

"alright ~ i'll go back . nobody love me at all" i said with sad face then leave .it'll be a boring flight. i'm alone now but when i found my seat there is a man who is sleeping now  his  face was cover with cap, sunglasses and mask. who is he ? anyway it's ok i dont have to be alone all this long flight. suddently that man move then wake up. 

"Niel?" deep voice @@

"Minsoo Hyung? is this you?"

"yeah~ its' me " he removed his mask and sunglasses. Wow~ this will be a great flight.....

 

*END CHAPTER 22*


I finished it . is it's ok ?? do you think Channie will leave even he already promised ???

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Rinininette #1
I think it's a good fic with a potencial but like you said it at each chapter, English is not your first language and you make many grammar and spelling mistakes ^^' so it's disturbing. And then you write in SMS language so... English is really the main problem, and I know you can improve it like I did :)
Beside that, the story plot is great and there are lots of drama, so we don't really have boring and short passages. Your chapters are long enough, it's a good point. Maybe you should have developed a little more about the life problems about ChangRick, but this is okay, because we have already the beginning of their love life and some parts of Changhyun's pregnancy ^^
So good job for your fic and hope you'll improve!
hanneulbyungchan
#2
Chapter 36: I waited for this last chapter...for so long...love it such a wonderful ending!!!! ^__^
yumisawanga
#3
Chapter 36: aaawwwww this was just so amazing thank you for writing it!!!!!! XD
Songjiin #4
Chapter 36: Don't shift to chuniel.. I do like them but just as brothers relation.. Not like chunjoe that's have special relation(love)
auliya_angel #5
Chapter 36: this story is amazing..
please make a sequel or make a new chunjoe fanfic...
hanneulbyungchan
#6
Chapter 35: wahaah!!!I read your story for two days...please update soon!!!!
hanneulbyungchan
#7
Chapter 8: waaah!!! really love your story...we almost have same mind i think..in terms of writing stories...^__^...love it!!!

I hope Chanhee is a girl!!!!,,,,yet I imagined he is....
Songjiin #8
Chapter 34: update soonnn.... im anticipating the end of the story....its a great story ever..
Galaxy_30 #9
Chapter 34: Gah~Update I want Chunjoe back together. I want Channie to get pregnant again. Who knows he might have 2 boys and a girl~~~. XD Great story btw!
dysch05 #10
Chapter 33: waaa this story will be end..I hope happy ending ^^ it's good story author-nim. I liked it. update soon please..^^