Story Title: Crooked Road

Author: GybzyXiao

Reviewer: ParkYong-Kyo

Title- 5/5

I love this title! It's simple and draws in the reader!

Graphic/Poster- 5/5

I like how it's a simple poster. It brings in the feel of the story!

Foreword/Description- 15/15

The description was awesome! It told us everything we needed to know about the story without spoiling anything for us! Great job!

Characterization- 9/10

The characters are unique! I love them!

Language- 23/30

I found a lot of mistakes, so I'll point out a few:

ChaeRin had never spent so much time waiting for someone

ChaeRin shuddered and pulled up her thick woolen hoodie.

They had been dating for a week now and ChaeRin has never had such little patient for someone before.

Her face was covered by the white sleet

 Those were a few of the mistakes I found. If you want to know more, just tell me :)

Plot/Originality/Flow- 22/25

I rarely see plots with the ex-boyfriend theme, and when I do, they're nothing like this story! The story went on well and had flowed with a good pace.

Bonus/Overall Enjoyment- 10/10

I love stories with strong female protagonists!

Overall:  89/100

Reviewer’s Note

I ship SkyDragon so hard >.<

Update soon, Author-Nim