An Adult's Reality

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Description

If you love someone, you have to be able to let them go...

Foreword

Heya, my lovely readers~

Sorry about the bad description. You know I at it. XD

 

So yeah... This oneshot... I wrote it as a whim of mine. Wrote it in about four hours straight on my tablet while listening to the new SM the Ballad album. So this is something like an unplanned pregnancy. No offense.

 

I wanted to try out the angst genre, but I don't know whether I have succeeded or not. I am inexperienced with trying to evoke emotions in my readers so yeah... We will see how this turns out to be...

 

Cheerio~

- almightyYimmie

 

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jjongsmeat #1
Chapter 1: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I AM SAD :((((( it was a really good oneshot though!!
snowangel245 #2
Chapter 1: DIE TT why did u do this to me, to key , to jonghyun. :'( I'm hating u rite now, ur a meany ;p XD, I really liked it and I understood that this isn't a fairytale so the ending was appropriate, still the hardcore jongkey shipper inside me wishes they had end up together, aigoo it couldn't be helped anyways I luved it ♥
jjongluvbummie #3
Chapter 1: well as always like your other fics i also loved it.a really nice angst.thanks alot
PrMrulez #4
Chapter 1: I really liked it. ^.^
Yeah this is how reality works T.T... It would have been a bit strange to make the ending all lovely with them getting together again so I am happy that the ending was like this. Everything has their own time and if that passes there would never be the same.
We can't always live like in our dreams and fantasies.
You said that you are inexperienced in evoking emotions in your readers; I am one of those that were moved by your writing, it made me cry for real. ^.^
Thank you for this and good luck in the future :*
kkbeasty #5
Chapter 1: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *flips table*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *falls off chair*
NOOOOOOO WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY *cries on the floor*
WHY DID IT END LIKE THIS???????? *ugly sobs*
THIS IS NOT THE REALITY I WANTED *runs away dramatically*
kkbeasty #6
Me gonna cry? ;-;
Please no cry ;A;
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