❛ Le t ' s  W a l k  Down  Memory Lane❜

Reviewed by: Infinityjong

Title (6/10)
There is nothing too special or attractive about it. However, it kind of fits the storyline in terms of Jongin and his lost memories. 

Characterisation (5/10)
The main characters are directed well in the story. But, they lack description on their looks and personality. There is a lack of indirect description of the characters, not just Kyungsoo and Jongin. The certain side-characters are introduced too quickly and thus affecting the flow of the story. Eg Kwon Yuri and Kim Yoo Jung. The relationships between the characters are also not properly introduced since by calling a character: Hyung, Oppa, Unni, Dongsaeng, Noona does not mean they are related. Therefore, this causes the story to be slightly confusing. 

Setting (6/10)
There is a lack of descriptive words as places that the characters are in are described at all. However, we are aware of where the characters are through the story. Though, in this one-shot, there is almost no need to describe the characters’ surroundings, it is still recommended to do so a little. 


Problem/ Conflict (15/20)
We are able to identify the character’s conflicts and problems faced. However, these certain problems are not mentioned openly to the readers. Eg the communication problems between Jongin and Kyungsoo. We also understand clearly why they feel so. 

Organisation (10/20)
The story is organised but lacks a flow to it. The change from event to event is choppy. The flow of story is very important as it has the ability to ruin a good plot almost entirely. Though it has elements of a story, it is not well expressed through the story. 

Illustrations (9/10)
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