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I'm not sure if it's a very good idea but when I browsed through my story folders, I came upon a couple of half-assed chapters, so I decided to just upload them in case anyone is interested in reading them.

Here you can find the original version of the chapters 9 and 12. I actually rewrote them both, because Chanyeol and Xiumin turned out a bot too whiny for my liking, so if you want to compare, go ahead.

Here you can find sequel ideas that never made it. I actually wanted to create a big sequel made of many one-shots, but whenever I tried writing something, it grew depressing and too negative. I actually wanted to write a Xiuyeol story in which they both somehow manage to be happy despite everything, but I somehow created way too many obstacles. (That, and genderbend is awkward after all.)

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EmptyTinkerbell
#1
Chapter 12: This should be a fan fiction of the 2017 year. I'm serious. This story is so great, I'm speechless. There were some things I was confused about, but I understood the story quite well (uh, I hope I did lol). Your writing and creativity are so good! It's... wow. Sorry, I'm still overwhelmed with this story. But heads down to you.
EmptyTinkerbell
#2
Chapter 11: OH MY GOD. THE PLOT TWIST ADFSJDBKSDSD. IT BLOWN MY MIND. THIS IS SERIOUSLY GOLD.
I-I am speechless. It's just... The best plot twist ever! EVER!!!
Sorry, I'm just... WOAH :O
EmptyTinkerbell
#3
Chapter 10: Heck, I didn't consider something like that happening at all! Woah. Kris really has it tough, poor him...
EmptyTinkerbell
#4
Chapter 9: Oh my. Xiumin hurt Chanyeol and I'm not sure if it was unconsciously... They were so close! If Chanyeol didn't want it, he would not start it, right? Now, Chanyeol is hurting :<
EmptyTinkerbell
#5
Chapter 8: Woah, Tao is so observant and smart! To be honest, I didn't expect it from him. His interaction with Chanyeol made me think that he's quite reckless, or maybe should I say... rude. I never take into consideration that there's more to him than that rude facade. Shame on me!
EmptyTinkerbell
#6
Chapter 7: Is there a person in this story who had a happy childhood? In that world it's probably hard to have... The world there is so cruel... I wish I could go there, take the boys, and bring them here ;_;
EmptyTinkerbell
#7
Chapter 6: Oh my God, Tao XDDD I don't know how it was possible, but when I read that he startled Kris and Lay, I was startled as well O.O Magic~~ hahaha
Shiet, I hope that Lu or Xiumin aren't sick! I'm so curious what they're talking about, hmm...
EmptyTinkerbell
#8
Chapter 5: Oh . What the hell happened to Chanyeol... again? What's with him being in the weird trance? Xiumin almost died! I'm just glad that it didn't end much worse than that...
EmptyTinkerbell
#9
Chapter 4: It's so good that Yeol has Xiumin, he would be very lonely without him... And the scene with Chanyeol heating Xiumin's tea? So cute! I hope there will be more things like that between the two of them :3 Aw!
EmptyTinkerbell
#10
Chapter 3: Flying can be useful at times too! Kris should appreciate himself more >u< And wow, he has quite an interesting crew. I just hope that he won't sell Chanyeol or something D: