Nice oneshot ^^

Key<3

Oh, I love this. I absolutely love this that words cannot describe how much I adore this <3<br />
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Rarely do we see this dorky side of Key since he is usually portrayed as the snarky, diva-esque member of the group if he isn't busy mothering them all. I have no qualms with this kind of characterization [especially if it's done right] since this is how most perceive him to be, but this new side of Key you've brought out is just really refreshing =3 He's still his fierce self in this [who bickers with someone over ramen, seriously? XD] of course, albeit watered down but not too drastic that he's unrecognizable.<br />
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This comes off more as a friendship fic/genfic to me [unless I'm not looking hard enough for the fluff ^^;;] but I still like it all the same. First they fight over one cup of ramen but show some progress on reaching an unvoiced compromise when they decide to split the donut in half. For me, that is the best highlight of the entire story and I'm glad you ended it there because it wouldn't be half as charming if you gave a much more conclusive ending =D <br />
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You have some typos [you misspelled "selling" in the Description field; also, "he stood to close for her to be comfortable" -- I think you meant "too"] but everything else is fine. You've done a really good job on this story; the length is just right and you give out enough details to stir one's imagination without relying too much on flowery language. May you continue writing and contributing to this fandom, and I look forward to reading another story from you in the future~! ^^v