First Date

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It was supposed to be the perfect date, with the perfect guy. Supposed to be...

Foreword

Joon Myeon let out a light chuckle. “Well, I don’t think today will be quite that eventful. I hope you don’t mind.”

It was on the tip of my tongue to say that he could take me to a landfill and I would still be happy if we were together, but I stopped myself because it sounded cheesy even in my head. I settled for a cheery, “Of course not.”

He beamed at me again, making me feel giddy (well, giddier, since my low blood sugar was already making me feel a bit light-headed), and asked me to wait while he went to buy the admission tickets. When I started to take out my wallet, he hurriedly assured me that it was his treat. Thrilled at this, I watched him jog off to the ticket booth with what I was sure a pathetically broad grin on my face. “Not a date, my foot,” I murmured to myself. “Why would he pay for my admission if this wasn’t a date? Dumb Woohyun.”

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Thank you to Feliciat of Luxicity Graphics for the lovely poster! Head over there if you want your own!

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Written for lovely_writer's contest Come and Get Your 2,000 Karma contest.

We had to write a story entitled First Date, and the first part of the story that you'll see in italics was provided as a prompt.

It's been a long while since I wrote non-rated stuff, so bear with me. Any comments or criticisms are welcome!

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Not an update, just some editing issues.

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introverdose
#1
Chapter 1: [SCREECHING]

I JUST FELT MY SOUL LEAVE MY BODY LIKE TWO HUNDRED AND NINE TIMES. YOU DID THAT.
Goshers, it's been so long since I've read het fluff?? I almost forgot for a while that heterouality existed. Thanks for reminding me in the best way ever. IT WAS SO CUTE JESUS CHRIST. I love it. I love you.
Aprilfools
#2
Chapter 1: Eep. I think I'll be popping up in your notifs a few times now because I'm planning to read all your stories. This is so so cute and I can easily imagine woohyun saying and doing all of that. Hayeon's humour made everything so much funnier. Ah, now I miss my bestfriend. xD
elexctra
#3
Chapter 1: so cute. so so so cute I can't even. I love the character's personality! Especially her humor my goodness. Also Woohyun in this story is just... you little sneaky boy. Thank you for writing a story like this! :)
thegracest #4
Chapter 1: This is so cute! ^-^
jungmiho
#5
Chapter 1: Awwwwwww first love
love_infinitelkim #6
Woohyun. You are my cupcakes, sweet, goodies tooth. Is that even considered a word? lol
sendohime #7
Chapter 1: Ugh, why didn't I read this sooner! Not only do I love Nam Woohyun and fluff, but I love when YOU write fluff. You are the queen of writing angst, however, and you will reign with that title forever and ever.
Man, Joonmyeon was so innocently oblivious I wanted to cry. It was so cute. And I felt like I could relate to the OC, crushing on someone oh-so perfect but hating everything he likes, but doing it anyway because it's him.
And dammit Woohyun, why do you gotta be so pushy! You've turned her life virtually boy-free, with the exception of you of course. You sly, sly dog. Those poor little boys though.
And also, what kind of amusement park is this LOL. Fine, I can deal with it selling burgers and super-boned fish. But, the merry go round. It had horses, AND camels!? Imagining Joonmyeon on a camel is just beautiful, by the way. And then the farm has bunnies, goats, AND kangaroos!? Just how on earth...
Anywayyy, beautiful read! I miss you so~
byeollie
#8
Chapter 1: jgdkshanfcolsdhcfolwhecf i came back here to read all the while not expecting anything (like how i felt when i first read this) but guess what?? agsdhihndoqwndohqwnodnoq i'm still squealing hard enough that my dormitories neighbour knock on my door and tell me to shut up. lmao. annd i regret nothing. wooooohyunnnnnnnnnn
buntae
#9
Chapter 1: Oh my gosh, I totally loved this! It was so entertaining and funny! I actually had an accident with fish like Haeyeon, but my dad pulled out the fish bone with tweezers. : ( I really hope that you write a sequel in the future! ^ u ^