CuteNerdyVicky
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[soory i won't up the the story link or your profile 'cause i'm on my phone and back from my exams]
Title: It sounds like your best friend confessed to you and you already had a lover, which make you confused who to choose. [6 points]
Description: Please don't put their introduction, it's very annoying and your plot got already spoiled in your foreword. [Sorry, you got 0 points in here.]
Plot: Very original, I tell you. Some errors like "i dont know anymore...sigh...blah blah blah". Write it as " I don't know anymore what's happening with me." I sighed. Though, there are lot of grammatrical errors, the story is good nevertheless. Good flow. [20 points]
Character development: All i can say is 'wow' you did a good job. [30 points.]
Comments: Change your foreword and description. Those annoying lines could make readers turn around and look for other stories.
Overall: 56 points.
R/N: SOrry to make all of you wait.
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