Demon Within

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*Slowly* Luhan here #sighs. It's been 4 hours, 4 good hours. Didn't that she-demon have a heart! I guess she doesn't, afterall, demons' hearts aren't worthy of being called hearts. I've tried everything I can. Kneeling and concentrating, folding up my legs, connecting my fists and concentrating, anything to touch the core of my magic. I knew it was there, but I just couldn't.... reach it. And the total darkness I was in wasn't making matters better in the least. The pit had disabled my eyes from seeing in the dark too, apparently. I sighed again for the one thousandth time. I stood up from where ever it was I was sitting just a second ago, and stretched. When was I ever going to get out of here? I decided to wait it out, I was sure she would let me out if I stayed a few more hours because I wasn't even close to touching my magic. *Park Shin Hye's POV* #smiles# I can stay here for weeks, afterall, most demons spend up to 2 months to develop finally touch their magic. It's so funny to see them when they leave the pit all tattered and drained #Laugh# *Luhan's POV* She'll come for me anytime now... *4 hours later* 'Aishh! I'm dying in here, where is she!? I can't feel my magic right now, okay?' I yelled. No reply. 'Yah! Answer me!' That's when I heard her scream.... It was an agonizing scream that got into me, within me and shook me. What was going on? She screamed again, and this time, it was too much for me, I had to help her, but how would I get out of the pit? Her last scr

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So so sorry I haven't updated for so long, that's not my style. It's just that there've been some issues. i'll update as soon as possible, I promise, thanks!

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Raven007 #1
Thanks, dongsaeng!
Pandaisy
#2
Chapter 12: Wahhh great chapter!!
omololalois
#3
U should update soon mike
Ohhani2
28 streak #4
Chapter 11: Owk? what just happened?.......*k clearing my confused mind*.....plz stop keeping me in suspence!!..update soon.
Raven007 #5
Thanks for all your encouraging comments! It gets better by the way.... The next chapter will be quite.... Surprising #wink
imeli11 #6
Chapter 10: hmmn i'm eager 2 read d next chapter
Pandaisy
#7
Chapter 10: Cliffhanger again??!! Arghhhh!! I hope you update soon!! ^^
Ohhani2
28 streak #8
Chapter 10: Nice!!.....update soon.btw the story is cool!!!
Raven007 #9
Thanks for all the comments! You really cheer me on! I'll update as soon as I can
Pandaisy
#10
Chapter 9: Waahhh! Duo magic? Thats sooo freaking cool!! Please update soon! I cant wait to see Shin Hye's reaction once she knows his power!! ^^