HIDDEN LOVE

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‘I got it.. that’s our deal..! ‘ he said with a sweet smile.

 

‘owh arrassoe..that makes me very fired up with your challenge’ she said proudly and confidently, showing her double-jerk face with their deals.

 

What kind of deal..? What is going on between them..?

 

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‘Don’t worry kid. From now on I’ll take care of you and you’ll always be my son forever’

he whispered to the baby boy, whose parents had trusted him to take care of their child when they were no longer alive in this world. Suddenly his eyes became teary thinking of Kim Sunggyu's fate. This child lost his parents at 3 months old, but he promised to Kim Sunggyu's late parents and to himself that he would take care of this child until the end of his life.

Kim Sunggyu was the only son of the KIM EMPIRE, the largest influence in Korea.

Since his parents died in a car crash, the lawyer of his family took him as an adopted son.

As a lawyer of the family, Mr.Lee took care of Kim Sunggyu very well and he believed Sunggyu would manage his family's empire on his own when he was an adult.

 

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"I love you not only for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you.."

- Kim Sunggyu

 

"When I see him my heart runs faster than a marathon, if only he knew that I loved him.."

- Jung Hye Ri (you)

 

"My heart to you is given, do give yours to me, we'll lock them up together, and throw away the key.."

- Xi Lu Han

 

 

"Should I smile because we're friends..? Or should I cry because that's the only thing we can ever be..? "

- HIDDEN LOVE

Foreword

KIM SUNGGYU

-The 1st ranking student in Busan International Highschool

-18 years old

-Cold hearted guy and he loves to be alone

-Never gives up

-Handsome, kind-hearted and a ‘savior’

-The only son of the EMPIRIAL OF KIM

-Lives with his family's lawyer, Mr.Lee

 

JUNG HYE RI ( you )

-The 2nd ranking student in Busan International Highschool

-18 years old

-Kim Sunggyu’s rival

-Never..never..never gives up!

-Pretty, innocent and fierce

-Lives with her happy family even though they're not rich

-Very determined person

-Has a sweet twin brother, Nam Woohyun

 

XI LU HAN

-The 1st ranking student in Seoul Highschool

-18 years old

-Kim Sunggyu's cousin

-Opponent of Kim Sunggyu

-Lives with his younger sister, Jung Krystal, since their parents are in China

 

INFINITE

-Have their own characters and stories

-The students of Busan International Highschool

-The top 10 ranking

-18 years old

 

EXO

-The 12 hottest and top guys in Korea

-Six of them study in Seoul Highschool

-The other six studied at Busan International school

-One of them was the Headprefect in BIH

-They are well known and famous with the name 'EXO'

-They were the 'enemy' of INFINITE

-18 years old

 

I U 

-Your bestie forever

-The 4th ranking student of BIH

-Adorable, cheerful and supportive friend

-Has a crush on your twin

 

JUNG EUNJI

-Your bestie forever

-The 5th ranking student of BIH

-Talkative, cheerful and too protective

-The rival of Lee Howon (HOYA)

 

JUNG KRYSTAL 

-17 years old

-Sister of Xi Luhan

-Studies at Seoul Highschool

-Cute and sweet girl

-Has had a crush on Kim Sunggyu since she was 5 years old

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FROM THE AUTHOR :

This is my first fanfic about my bias, kim sunggyu -sshi .. i hope you enjoy my first story :)

please do comment,subcribe or vote up..

i need your support and suggestion..

thank gyu :D

thanks to my friends for support me and for my sis,

sangyomi..my friends who make the poster and background underagesyam and sehunterxoxo..thank you..

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jooniRa #1
i like ur story so far :) aren't there any more chapters ?
towel- #2
Hello there. You posted this link on my wall and so now I'm here.

About your presentation: You should keep the font and font colour the same all the way through to the end of your story, and I don't think putting images in your story is a very good idea, after all the idea of writing is to paint a picture with words.

English isn't your first language, am I right? I think you should get a beta reader. They help.

Otherwise, your plot is good, Sunggyu is portrayed as a smart kid again. I like that.
gyuwifey #3
Chapter 7: i'm totally agree with Nhoxmew's review..seriously u should listen to the advice..
Nhoxmew #4
Chapter 7: Hey, here comes my review, but don't feel down okay?

First thing I wanna say is your presentation. Why is your font size increasing after each chapter? Also, I strongly discourage putting pictures in your fanfic... One, it's kinda interrupts with the story flow although it was a helpful reminder, but you could do better by actually describe them by words :) Two, I think all of the characters pic and description should be in the character list in the foreword. Everyone has their own writing style. If this is how you like it to be, please keep it this way. Afterall, this is your fanfic, but do consider my advice :)

Your English is a big problem here. From this I guess English is not your mother language? I suggest you find a beta-reader. That would really help :)

The story plot is interesting so far :P But please reduce the font size and keep it constant through out the chapters. It hurts my eyes with such a big font and the change in size lol Sorry for being such a picky reader :(

Please, please, please don't take this personal. I'm just being honest. You have a good idea and plot. You just need to work on your English and presentation. Just keep writing and eventually you will be good at it. After all, practice makes perfect! Hwaiting!

P.s/ I wish I could be nicer to a wonderful subscriber like you, but my honesty side prevents me from doing so. Please, I don't mean to offend you in any way. I apologise for being so harsh :( Thank you for subscribing to my fic!
byeollie #5
Chapter 5: Oh, and of course another way to improve your writing is to read more. For the first step, you have to find and discover good stories in AFF because there are many talented authors out there. Don't be shy to talk and ask for their writing tips. I think most of them are friendly and generous people. They won't bite. :)
byeollie #6
Chapter 5: You'll get better as long as you keep writing. Im not perfect with my grammar and all but just make sure that the vocabs you write are correctly used or it might change the meaning hence your readers might confuse. Anyway, keep practicing. :)
azure_bliss #7
Chapter 7: The story is interesting so far, but... Luhan is just Luhan, there's no 'Xi' in his name. Lol, don't feel bad about it, cause frankly, a lot are confused too. The characterizations are good too ^^ However, you might wanna check back your sentence building and grammar. There's little of them now but the sooner you fix them, the better the story will be.

Good luck with the story and happy writing. Hwaiting!
Arisa_Ameiru #8
Aw... I just read the forward, but it's really interesting! :D The quotes were what really got to me. :) I hope you do amazing in the future author-nim! :D Hwaiting! ;)
Wuyifanwifeylol #9
Chapter 6: omo ~ luhan... <3
update sonon~
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