who should I love (Hiatus)

Description

you went to a forest, which is next to a small villiage where you stay, to find 2 packs of werewolves that the parents forbid you to go after the 18th birthday as a rumured was said that after the age of 18 the werewolves will eat you up. in order to protect the child the parents will tell them not to enter the forest at their 18th birthday. maybe you are going to fall in love with one of the werewolves?

 

 

 

Foreword

hi this is the first time writting a fanfic. my english is quite bad and im not that immaginative 

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Lolypop123 #1
Chapter 15: The story is confusing :O
HunnyBunny12 #2
Chapter 18: Update soon
gothprincess666 #3
Love the chapters and the story its starting to get interesting:)
Lunafire #4
Chapter 12: Heheheheheheh~my responce to the first paragraph
Kpop1urver #5
Haha ikr I was doing amath while writing this chap n I can't stop laughing
loveUso #6
Chapter 3: omo !!! i love it >////< omg its sooooooooo nice i really love this story >3<
jabberwockjay #7
Hi. I just checked on this story. I think the storyline is somewhat common, but it's okay though. Just keep in mind that the major spelling mistakes are way too much and please do give "__" for dialogs.It confuses the reader if you didn't give it in. I'm sorry for being harsh and please check through the chapter before publishing it. Grammatical errors in the chapters really irks me. Thanks and I hope you improve more.. you should try getting a beta reader or co-author that really got the quality to correct you. What is the use of co-author if he/she didn't even bother to help you OR his/her English is also bad?
Wolf99 #8
Chapter 6: OMG!! it's hot~~~~
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