Can't Hold Back

Description

When asked to bring a drunk Daesung home, Youngbae, as the good hyung he is, naturally agrees. But a drunk Daesung is dangerous (and tempting), or so Youngbae will soon realise.

Foreword

... Hmmm. I've been contemplating whether to put this online or not ever since I wrote it (a week or so ago). As you see, I finally decided on 'yes' (although I'm very nervous about putting it up, ahaha. Ugh.)

Well, first of: I asked two of my friends to give me a sentence each and I'd then write a fic and include those sentences, hence, here we are! Soo... Ye. The fic might be a bit weird? Oh, and do note that I've never really written before. This was my own way of forcing myself to get used to writing or something. Err. That being said, this is pretty much my first ty-ish fic, so it might not be too good.

Genre is a bit on the... romantic side, some humour (/crack-ish), mh... Is -ish considered a genre?

Hmm... Yes, all that aside, I'm a woman on a mission! The world needs more Daebae-lovers and so that's what I'm trying to make! (Whether I'm succeeding or not is another thing entirely.)

Oh, and if you spot any typos or other mistakes then do not hesitate to notify me!

... Well, yes. I do not think I have anything else to say. You may now proceed to the fanfic itself. (Take note of the prequel!)

Comments

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ILuvToDae #1
Chapter 2: I love this story!
SunDaeDreamz
#2
Chapter 1: Yes, this story here is my FAVORITE SunDae fic so far!
camsairen
#3
Chapter 2: It needs sequel xD
KPVIP26
#4
Chapter 1: Writer-nim Jjang!!!!
lost-in-bigbang
#5
Chapter 1: OMG I CANNOT ASDFGHJKL HYUUUUUUUUUNG~ ♡♥♡♥♡ The first prompt is really...relateable xD lol I freaking wuv this oneshot! ☆★☆★☆
KyuminCloudChan
#6
Chapter 1: //squealing
This was really good and cute and kyaa~ That steamy scene you wrote was >////u////<)b daebak~
I love your writing <33
AbsoluteHominy #7
Chapter 1: This was really cute. I like Dae when he's sassy and in control. Not letting Bae touch him wasn't fair though and I hope his hands and tongue get to thoroughly worship Dae's body another day. You had really good detail throughout the scene which I appreciate and I really loved when Bae said "I like you too" through the door. I can really see him doing that. As for the toilet line I didn't think it was mean, it was just Bae's natural sass. I thought it was funny.
I kind of hope you write a follow up to this. I want to see were they go from here. ^^
TitaHonduras #8
Chapter 1: Wow you need...no you must write more fics, this was genius!!!! Love daebae couple hope you continue writing.
maravilloso y genial!!!! Continua porfavor
banjak #9
Enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing!
ozwalkr #10
Chapter 1: A single word comes to mind....Owned... Bae got owned by Dae, Ji, and Top... Judging from what Ji said...Dae talks when drunk and at some point, told his hyungs about his desire for Bae...so they helped him out. Loved it!