Hopelessly

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"Hyung, what does Chen has against me?" Baekhyun sat down at the counter and looked in the older man's eyes. He wanted to know the truth.

"Why should he has something against you?" Xiumin asked surprised and lifted an eyebrow.

Baekhyun laughed bitterly and his gaze went to the other man again. He looked incredibly lifeless, emotionless as he stood there, staring at nothing particular while washing the cups which had been used earlier today.

However, the blonde couldn’t oversee how good-looking he was. His jawline, his lovely shaped lips and his hair that looked so soft.

"His smile!"

"What’s wrong with his smile?"

"It's fake and dead!"

Xiumin sighed and handed his friend the warm drink.

 


 

 

I’m really bad at writing forewords. I don’t like to write them anyway. However, I hope you give this story a go. Thank you for spending your time with reading my stuff. Hopefully you enjoy it. Commentaries would be appreciated. Tell me what you think and what I can do better. I still need to learn a lot :) and I’m truly sorry for my grammar I’m swiss and my English is not that great. 

 

I want to thank my lovely sister Alessandra for helping me with editing the story and for being my test reader. 

I love you <3

 


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If you haven't read the story yet, don't read the comments or you will get spoilered ;)

Thank you to all of you guys who subscribed to my story and upvoted it. I'm really happy.

I would be glad to get some more comments, I want to know what you guys think about the story :3

~ Chelina

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orangemorningstar #1
Chapter 3: This really took me so long to console myself I never cried this much for a fic.....it is honestly hard to digest....about your writing it's amazing sorry for saying this after 4 years but now only i have found this......before reading this fish I heard nothing better song....you know it feels really. ...it deals with reality.....hopelessly iam crying now......iam weak heart person....but thank you this my 1st time crying over a fic like this
AnaHsnh
#2
Chapter 3: Huaaa waeeeeee,, T_T that's so saad.
alicemusic666 #3
Chapter 3: That was such a sad fanfic. Baekhyunnie, noooo. :'(
jongdae_donghae
#4
This actually brought me to tears, it was so sad. You are very talented in writing author-nim.
for_now #5
Chapter 3: This was amazing and great and so absolutely sad!
Why would you hurt me this way, dear author?!?!
*cries*
*dies*
xx_toughcookie
#6
Chapter 3: When Baekhyun died I was literally so angry that I couldn't bear to finish it.
incaptive #7
Chapter 3: No get out, my heart can't handle this!!
PandaMinah #8
Chapter 3: You made me cry. This story is so amazing and emotional .
lilbaeklu
#9
Chapter 3: why so sad? It made me tearing.