Editing

How Can This Be? - Editing

Guys. I'm sorry for not updating Chapter 12 up. There is school and writer's block came out again so I woun't be out anytime soon...I guess... I failed you guys. I'm sorry

This story will be beta-ed/editing now since I realized, I messed up writing my story. I know some of you will ask how would you have mess up writing a story. Well...this is my first story so it would make sense right? And I also found many many errors so this story will need to be beta-ed/ edited. I really suggest that once Chapter 1 gets edited, please read it since there would be both major and minor changes in this story.

I also started writing in a new style so there won't be as much dialogue in this story and more details...I hope so... If you want to check out my one shots that have type of writing style I am talking about, I suggest you read This Day but you don't have to.

This story will also start in Third Person POV unless there would be a person's name on the top of the chapter then the story would be in that person's view point but not in first person.

Sorry for making you guys wait. I failed as an author.

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2407briana #1
Chapter 6: Thanks for updating!
2407briana #2
Chapter 5: Awww Kris and. Haneul are cute!
Frozenxiumin #3
Nice story^^
lovingmrgalaxy
#4
For some reason chapter 1 isnt showing
Crunky #5
Chapter 12: Chen must be a hella of a good hacker.
mahea_808 #6
Chapter 12: Ooo new reader btw im a little confused on wwhas going on where is haneul, sehum, and luhan? What are they planning? No offense but I kind of jope she ends up with kris sorry jongdae oppa?... update soon really love this story ;)
Rogue-Renegade
#7
Chapter 12: Okay, Chen=awesome hacker dude. More Chen hacking, please?!
Rogue-Renegade
#8
Chapter 11: Author-nim, I have skimmed this and I think it would be better if it were not so repetitive. You say the same thing multiple times adding a new thought now and then. Otherwise, I think it is pretty funny at times;) Keep going!
Crunky #9
Chapter 3: OMGGGGG Chen is jealous of Krisss XDDD
Crunky #10
Chapter 2: Woahhhhh she met Chen!!!!!! I hope Chen liked her!!!!