Friends, Brothers, Lovers

Description

A life thats is not perfect, a love that is no perfect. Broken promises, pain and tears. Welcom in the real life. Story about wrong love and decisions that we cant help making. In real life can there be a happy ending?

 

Foreword

I just felt like writting something like that. I think it will be a little bit angsty. I'm sorry about that but I really want it to be a story which is real as much as possible, and we all know that loving someone isn't just roses. What I can promise is I'm not planing to kill anyone, or separate for ages. Well I like happy endings after all. I don't know yet how long it will be. I don't want to make it to long.

Also you should be warned this is MALExMALE story. So if you don't like don't read. I don't know if there will be something graphic, so I didn't rate it for now.

English is no my first language, so if there is somewhere a good soul which would like to help me and be my beta I would appreciate it.

So, to the story.

Oh, and I would like you to tell me what you think.

 

 

Introduction

The room was dark . Gentle night light was shining through the large windows  illuminating scraps of the floor and furniture , creating a mosaic of silver and black . It crept across the oak floor , through white wool carpet. It climbed up on the black coffee table and for a while stopped at a closed bottle of amber liquid, glistening and dancing on its surface joyously , as if it did not care about the atmosphere of the room.

Then it get interested with a man sitting on a couch. It gently put its silver fingers on his chest and face. He lowered his head, and dark strands of his hair fell over his closed eyes. In this soft light man looked very pale, so pale that almost dead . And if not for his slowly rising and falling chest, one could think that he really was dead.

But he was not dead, even though he felt like he was dying. That's what he was, what he has, what he believed in was lost by the decision of one person. All hope for the future was gone. All spoken words, which he believed undoubtedly turned out to be just a bunch of empty words, which were fed to a fool. The only person he really loved stabbed him in the back.

 Lies, lies, lies.

One thing was certain. Andy was gone. And he was not coming back.

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Tezukai
#1
Chapter 3: This is such a good story, and I found it way late :D
I just, this is so good, and portrayed so realistically, I mean, the emotions are so good, and so sad :(
And Andy, why? I'm so sure he went to Junjin to tell him everything he did had been wrong, but he was too late, and now he's with Hwangbo
And Jin and her, that's such a sad story too :(
I just, I love your language, how, crude it is, yet, the descriptions are still detailed :D
But, just, the way they talk, how Junjin talks to Andy, how Andy replies, it's so, crude and, real
I really look forward to what you'll do :D
ricjindy #2
Chapter 3: I totally like this ^^. I like it when things become so messy, conflict here and there. Honestly I enjoy angst so much. Weird right? XD. And for Jinbo scene, hmm, I think you can give it a try :)
andy_dyan
#3
Chapter 3: omg noooooo! ur really gonna write jinbo scene? im sorry but I cant process the thought of them having ... :( too many people getting hurt and yeah jinnie's right his life is to ed up! now he will hurt hwangbo again... omg I cant!:(

emotions emotions!>< damn who ever is trying to separate my jindy!

*wait got a sudden feeling! god pls! its not hwangbo... is it? or am I ohver thinking again... orz
jun-kified #4
Chapter 2: Wahhhh, that's really depressing.. Jinnie ah, let me comfort you! -big hug-
NikeIsCraZy #5
Chapter 2: TAT
How am I supose to comment when it's so sad??? TAT
Did andy really love her or is it just a mask or mayve it's because he wants kids TaT
So sad....
Junjin!!!! TAT
Idk what to do.... it's too sad!!! D:
monicaandy
#6
Chapter 2: did someone else knew about them perhaps ? threatened andy about tell in it to the world so that is why he is marrying ? maybe the girl he is marrying ? i'm liking this alredy ! Will be waiting for another update and happy new year :)
andy_dyan
#7
Chapter 2: now im confused/curious on why did Andy changed his mind... and whats with eric's reaction...hmmmm kinda feel something is not right with his reaction...^^ or im just ohver thinking... nways thanks for the update!♡
tokki24
#8
Chapter 1: The ending part......makes me curious.... ><
Will looking forward to your next update~
andy_dyan
#9
Chapter 1: curious on whats gonna happen next ^^ will wait for the update... and authornim... im glad that its jindy ^^ thank you!♡
zatylitzshcj
#10
Andwae~~ did u killed andy oready bfore starting the fic? :'(
Lol just kidding ..
This looks interesting. Please do update ^^
Hwaiting author-nim!! :D