Chapter 1: That was a massive break up.. It was nice honestly on how you describe every part of it,so it's not bad nor good enough but rather an ok story.

Chapter 1: That was a massive break up.. It was nice honestly on how you describe every part of it,so it eas not bad nor good enough but rather an ok story.

Chapter 1: Can you put it in paragraphs? It will be easier to read and look more interesting to the readers too. A bunch of words put together seems kinda boring. Besides that, love your story. Update sooon