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Young Jongin just finished his picture when his older brother almost ruined it. It had to be perfect!
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Kaibaek kid!au
I made another thing.
And I made it when I am tired.
I don't think this is really well written, but I want practice.
So, if anyone can give me criticism, that would be lovely. Suggestions, Recommendations, etc. Anything to help me write better. Not just for stories, but for regular essays.
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