You Never Came Back

Description

Luhan and Jaemi used to be the happiest couple on the world, but one mistake ruined their relationship.

The worst part was, they couldn't solve their problem.

 

Five years wasn't a short period of time.

But Luhan was still haunted by the guilt.

He thought the misunderstanding was his fault.

He even waited for several years, but she never came back.

Foreword

Annyeong! This is my first ever one-shot.

English isn't my first language so bear with my grammar errors.

Critique are allowed to improve my writing skills.

Please subscribe and comment! Upvote if you want to ^^

Enjoy the mayo reading!

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DO NOT BASH, COPY, TRANSLATE, ETC. WITHOUT ANY PERMISSION. THIS IS PURE MY IDEAS, SO ANY SIMILARITIY MAYBE ONLY COINCIDENCE.

 

POSTER AND BACKGROUND CREDITS TO @NAMWOOHYUNWIFEY ~ THANKYOU SO MUCH ♥

 

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COPYRIGHT ©BYACELL — 2013

byacell
I decided to change the title and edited some grammar mistake(s). I hope you guys wouldn't mind hehe ^^

Comments

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EXOticLOVE48
#1
this is sad and idk why i have a bittersweet feeling towards me > <
EXO_ficsnsd #2
Chapter 1: its sad to..sob2 good start...do more stories ..fighting!
kpoplover215
#3
a very good start for a new author :)))) you are very good
ch0c0late1996 #4
Chapter 1: It's a nice story and especially when you're a new author. Keep it up. =]
Djulee
#5
Chapter 1: Wow.. So sad and so cruel xD But the story is nice. You have talents in planning out a story plot just needs some improvement but I understand you since you're just a beginner. But I suggest you improve more on your grammar. *thumbs up* Fighting!
strongheadgurl01 #6
Chapter 1: nice story!!i liked it!!
Juliano
#7
Chapter 1: aww so sad and you should a series of Exo's Kris, and Bts V
it's a good start I m new at this too
Good Job DAEBAK
Exoxo88_
#8
Chapter 1: nice story for a beginner :) Keep up the good work! fighting ^ ^
eunnikhaneul29
#9
Chapter 1: Nice story. Good start. :D
serenahuang
#10
Chapter 1: Wahhhhh! This is a really nice story especially because you are a new author! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to more stories from you! ^^