Scared !! (P.1)

A new world *o*

                          

 

 

*After 3h~5h*

I heard a loud voice coming from downstairs .. That SOUND waked me and freaked me out ..

I  stood up in daze , finding my way to downstairs I went . It was dark that I couldn't find the way to open the lights .

- " Where did it go .. seriously !! " I kept looking around~ " There it is !! " 

I opend the light and I saw the door of the apartment wide open 

I said : - " I thought I closed it earlier !! " making my way to the door I closed it , then a HAND touched my shoulder and the person said : - " aaaa~~ " ( the sound of the girl who in "the grudge" made it )then the lights went out 

I turned to face him like a brave girl while openning the lights again .. The lights were open but no one were infront of me .. I looked around the room but there is nothing .

I searched every corner of the house but no one is there . 

I remembered my brother .. he didn't get back until this hour !!!

*making my way to my room upstairs*

I layed in bed hugging my bear , not turning off the lights .. I was reall terrified that I couldn't sleep .

I took my phone to check on my brother .

It kept ringing .. ringing .. ringing ; then he answered

- " What do you want ? " he asked yelling on me 

- " where are you till this hour ?? " I shouted on him 

- " Why are you not sleeping !! it's late , you have school 2morrow .. go to sleep immediately " he said 

 - " I was asleep but I hear somthing in the house waked me up I went to check and I found the front door open .. I thik th-e-re 

is som-o-ne in the hou-s-e " I said these words freaking out .. *sound of foot steps coming*  

- " Who's there !!! " I screamed

- " What's wrong !! someone on the house !! how could that be .. " he didn't finish asking and heard a loud scream and then an evil laugh , he kept  calling my name but no answer thne the call was over ..

He freaked out from where he is and said :

- " Guys , sorry but I have to go .. something urgent had happened .. when you organize an  event  .. call me !! okey "

- " Okey !! hope everything will be okey there , Dude !! " one of the guys said

He get out from the cafe .. and jumped in the car and made his way straight home .

He arrived , ran to the door , open it !! .. and no one at home , eveything is ... " oh no!! " eveything is upside-down , the house was messy ... He had evil thoughts pooped out from his mind 

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Author PS : 

[ hope u enjoy it ... wait for me ... to update next chapter *high five* ... thx for ur support guys ] heart

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KKATSU #1
Chapter 2: since I am new here so I dont know how much..not to be rude but in chapter 1 i found lot of grammartical mistakes like there are some :its buzz of bees not bee of bees...there are dishes not is dishes. look at the clock not looked to the clock.its i entered inside not i enter in.its their uniform not they uniform...overall the plot was good and I respect your enthusiam o.0
Miya_Harumi
#2
Chapter 5: I liked the The Grudge part :p
Cuz I love this movie xD
I like it so far~~
Some spelling mistakes but.. Still good c:
MYumeSekai
#3
Chapter 7: Jelly V~
Anyways, there were a lot of misspellings.
For example, okey is spelled okay.
Pated is supposed to be patted
periode is supposed to be period.
there's a lot more misspellings, but those i wrote are just some examples
QStella #4
Hey there, btw the pics r great! ;) hope this make u feel better! ^^
MYumeSekai
#5
Chapter 7: Ooo~ who are the guys...
There are some spelling errors.
And I hope u update soon!
MYumeSekai
#6
Chapter 5: AIGOO! that's scary. i hope the next chapter is not scary...
Nagisa-chan #7
Chapter 5: your story is great! *-* I hope you upload soon the next part! :D
doraemonlovescooking #8
oh... a BTS fanfic... gotta read it
Rinisempai
#9
Chapter 2: Reading this , interesting 8D .. in special cause otl BTS <3 upvoting and suscribing as well -w-
MYumeSekai
#10
Chapter 4: THAT PUPPY IS SO FLUFFY!!!! I want to cuddle and snuggle with it. Please update soon! I wanna know what happens next.