Dear readers

A new world *o*

PS : ( If u red chapter 13 : They Left .... reread it PLZ cuz i added something ... sorry *bow* .. My mistake .. ù_ù ) 

 

Dear Readers 

  • Did U like My story ( FanFic ) ... ?
  • How was it ?
  • If yes ... Comment YESS !! 

=>  And I'll update the LAST CHAPTER ( which is the most importing chapter and the most exciting ) 

  • If not .... ( which is no comment .............) 

=> I'll wait .... *pout* 

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kkkkkkk our Jin 

  ... So lovely~ 

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 kkkkkkkkkkk~~ >w<"

................. I'll wait for u guys .. *(^_^) ... high five ... xoxo

 

 

 

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KKATSU #1
Chapter 2: since I am new here so I dont know how much..not to be rude but in chapter 1 i found lot of grammartical mistakes like there are some :its buzz of bees not bee of bees...there are dishes not is dishes. look at the clock not looked to the clock.its i entered inside not i enter in.its their uniform not they uniform...overall the plot was good and I respect your enthusiam o.0
Miya_Harumi #2
Chapter 5: I liked the The Grudge part :p
Cuz I love this movie xD
I like it so far~~
Some spelling mistakes but.. Still good c:
MYumeSekai #3
Chapter 7: Jelly V~
Anyways, there were a lot of misspellings.
For example, okey is spelled okay.
Pated is supposed to be patted
periode is supposed to be period.
there's a lot more misspellings, but those i wrote are just some examples
QStella #4
Hey there, btw the pics r great! ;) hope this make u feel better! ^^
MYumeSekai #5
Chapter 7: Ooo~ who are the guys...
There are some spelling errors.
And I hope u update soon!
MYumeSekai #6
Chapter 5: AIGOO! that's scary. i hope the next chapter is not scary...
Nagisa-chan #7
Chapter 5: your story is great! *-* I hope you upload soon the next part! :D
doraemonlovescooking #8
oh... a BTS fanfic... gotta read it
Rinisempai #9
Chapter 2: Reading this , interesting 8D .. in special cause otl BTS <3 upvoting and suscribing as well -w-
MYumeSekai #10
Chapter 4: THAT PUPPY IS SO FLUFFY!!!! I want to cuddle and snuggle with it. Please update soon! I wanna know what happens next.
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