Author's Note

The Rewrite

 

Hullo~

So, thank you so much for reading this fic. I knew it was terribly written, I feel like everything is a jumble of words here and there. ;A;

Half of the fic was written while I was watching my youngest brother playing bowling --he was shortlisted to be one of the candidates of the athlete's selection for our national bowling team. So yes, I was stuck at the bowl for two days straight. My father insisted us to be there to cheer him, so I have to tag along and wrote half of the story in my notebook. ;__________; 

So, that would probably explained why this fic is so messed up. OTL.

 

 

and to be honest, there's actually almost half of the original plot that was taken out -there were more kaisoo moments in that part.OTL-

because I'm in a rush and I need to complete this a.s.a.p

I'm thinking of writing a sequel for that unwritten plot, so it won't go wasted,

but that will depends on how many people think this story in interesting enough. >.<

I don't want to be excited alone. LOL. XD

 

 

Anyway, I feel the need to explain a few things about this fic, since I think it's a bit confusing. (I think so. OTL)

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So, here is the thing... If you notice this, there's actually two different flashbacks in the story.

One is about Luhan's and Kyungsoo's past, while the other one is about Jongin's & Kyungsoo's first meeting each other.

I put everything in sequence except for the last part of Luhan's & Kyungsoo's past.

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If you're wondering whose past did Kyungsoo rewrote, though it was pretty obvious whom, 

it was his own.

He decided to undo his own past not because he was selfish, in fact he took everything into consideration and decided that the one he rewrote is the focal point; the start of everything.

Luhan's soul was tainted because he didn't get the punishment that he deserved, though deep down in his heart he knew he was wrong. His guilt and fear was what made him changed into the mean guy & also a betrayer.

And Jongin lived a lonely life because his family can't afford to pay his bill and later abandoned him. He became a successful man but he had no one by his side, which made him feel lonely thus triggered the suicide attempt. Well, technically he did die, and he was still alive when the story ended because well, Kyungsoo rewrote the past.

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Now, who the heck is Baekhyun? and why couldn't Kyungsoo remembered him when he saw him in his dream?

First, Baekhyun is a lost soul stuck in that old oak tree. There's actually a story behind his character, but I cut it off too. /wails/ I'll definitely going to write a separate story for him later. -.-

Second, Kyungsoo couldn't remember him because towards the ending, Baekhyun was convinced that Kyungsoo had made the right decision, and so he erased the fact that Kyungsoo had met him & then rewrote his own past. So, basically Kyungsoo would only remembers that Jongin was involved in a crash with Luhan, and he paid for the latter's medical bills, and then got attached to him.

fin~

LOL.

 

This isn't the best from me. I feel like the were a lot of parts that I can do better, which I might fix when I had some free times.

But thank you so much for spending your time reading this oneshot. (it is a oneshot, I separated it into two because I don't think you guys would like the idea of reading a long chapter.) >.<

Still, thank you very much.

Please do leave your comment, and share with me what you think about the story.

I will appreciate them a lot! <333

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-xoxo- (YatLuvG-29/12/13)

 

 

 

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Kpop56
#1
Chapter 4: I loved reading this! It was well-written. Okay, so I don't really read this type of stories, but I really liked reading this. (:
blossompie #2
Chapter 4: This story is ahmazing omg

but...jongin will have a brain tumor in the future right? :d ughh feels