My Badass Baby

Description

The granddaughter and heir of a notorious Jopok Leader has just moved schools for the 9millionth time. Annoyed with the constant moving around, this time she is determined not to associate with anyone on any level past acquaintanceship. But there's a catch, she's been moved to Seoul West Boys' High, with SHINee. In the meanwhile, her dark childhood comes back to bite her on the .

Foreword

hey guys~ DFMB here with a new fic :DD
i hope you enjoy it!!

–Teaser–
My name’s not really Kim Hyunsuk, it’s Sunghee. In fact, I’m not even a boy. (Thank god I had a cold that day. Otherwise my voice may have given it away.) I’m the granddaughter and heir of a notorious Jopok leader (like the Korean version of Yakuza lords) and it’s hard for me to get around without being bashed and kicked out of the school every few months. So I decided, if I can’t join the goody goody two shoed world, I may as well go against it. And while I was at it, I may as well become a delinquent. I ended up cutting my hair short and since I have zero chest anyways, it wasn’t hard to pull it off as a guy.

Make sure you guys check out this review that I requested from ebbiechan.
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/145836/6

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fefedove #1 Mar 26, 2016 07:49:37

congrats~~~

minkiji #2 Mar 26, 2016 00:09:21

Also in regards to my comment below/previous comment I meant *to and *scene. Sorry writing from my phone is a bit difficult.

minkiji #3 Mar 26, 2016 00:04:55

Chapter 1: Nice start. It was interesting and yo say the least got me reading and interested for the next chapter. However if I could add a criticism or two/three. I would say that some of the story was a bit clichéd. Such as how you described the fighting scenes. And the last bit with her drinking the boba tea. Also you tend to repeat a lot of stuff when it is already implied. Such as again with the fight scenes or when she was in class and she introduced herself. A more specific example is when you describe the scene and then say this is how he/she felt. That's not necessary if you describe the scene well (which you did) you shouldn't have to say directly how they were feeling. The reader would/should know by the description. One last criticism is that you tend to add character descriptions too directly into the story. Which breaks up the flow of your story and makes it a bit rocky. Again if you describe the sceme or a characters actions well enough you don't have to outright state that he's a bad or a great friend or whatever the case may be. As the saying goes, "show don't tell". In any case the chapter was good, besides the above criticisms. Your writing was good overall and the storyline is interesting.

elliptical #4 Mar 25, 2016 22:05:57

congrats x

Passing_Fancy #5 Aug 13, 2013 23:38:34

Chapter 19: Wow. Just wow. I think this is the best fanfic I've read since I started reading these things. Not kidding.

Loved it! It was awesome. :) Poor Taemin, though. :( I was really shipping him and SungHee for a while. Oh well.

Great job! :D

Passing_Fancy #6 Aug 13, 2013 23:38:31

Passing_Fancy #7 Aug 13, 2013 23:38:30

nomnomninja #8 Aug 13, 2013 00:56:23

Chapter 19: OUEGRSDFOHILNERTSGD
I'M NOT EVEN THE FIRST COMMENT. OMG, I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW GOOD THIS IS! ROSIE WOULD BE PROUD. PERFECT ENDING.
CREYS
THIS IS WHAT YOU CAN ONLY CONVEY THROUGH TYPE AND NOT OVER CHIPS.

OMG.

TAE BB, OEHRGNSDJKOHEIRNGFOHERGFPHELRDFCPVIJLPOKLSDXOCJIBIFDJSAPSOALKMPWIO

WAS THAT GOOD?
MEOW.

dominikki #9 Aug 12, 2013 22:55:00

Chapter 19: Wow, that was so good!!
Reading this story has been such fun! Thank you for writing something so great :)

WatashinoOrenji #10 Jan 27, 2013 21:55:55

Chapter 18: THIS.IS.AN.AWESOME.STORY! It's too good that i almost cry. ;D