Chapter 1: This is so beautiful and just so sad in the end ;~; I really didn't expect that Jonghyun will lose his life to be honest. But anyway, I hope that Taemin will still be strong to live for himself and for Jonghyun, most especially.
Chapter 1: This is short, but it's just the right short. This is also skill, dear. Just a few carefully-chosen, well-used phrases is enough to leave such an impact on the readers. This is just the kind of heartbreak I needed in my life right now to show that I'm not dead to feelings yet (which is how I've felt living a dull, routined life... Also I agree with everything that my hubby already told you in her comment! Thank you for this lovely! <3
Chapter 1: this is good timing. i've been craving a good heartbreak story and then here you are granting satisfying my need.
what i like most about this is just, even though its simple, its very pure. they genuinely work to make a life for each other. the transitions were very subtle but left such an impact. no direct mention of the raw heartache that taemin must be going through, but its implied and i think thats the best way to convey emotion to your read, by not making it too obvious.
this was amazing. thank you, master.
Chapter 1: That really was sad, and somehow incomplete.
It was a really beautiful piece though. Perhaps something that can be turned into a chaptered story??
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