A Christmas That I'll Never Forget

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It was the 24th of December. The day before Christmas.

My beloved and I always spend our christmas together since we have gotten together.

And this christmas is no exception.

Foreword

Okay. I have no idea how this turned out to be longer than I thought. It was supposed to be a drabble but oh well. Blame my brain. XD

And this is a one-shot fic. :3

 

This is my first time entering a contest for writing. I don't know how it would turned out though.

Let's hope for the best. ^^

 

Contest: "santa's box • a christmas event" round one.

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Amalya #1
Chapter 1: Hmm. It's short and very bittersweet and somewhat confusing when you don't use any names to specifically let us know who is who except for at the very end. I suspected of course, but adding in a couple details for who was who wouldn't have hurt throughout.

I feel that in the beginning, this is so sugary sweet I should have cavities and in the end, it just turns bittersweet, though questions remain. It's certainly a tale of love and devotion and longing though I do have to wonder if Jungkook is merely a figment of Jin's imagination here or that he actually does return for a single day. If so, how? And also, how/why did he die in the first place. Also, you do slightly contradict yourself when Jin asks Jungkook to meet him 'tomorrow night' since at the end, you also specify that they are only able to touch each other on Christmas.

Otherwise, it is an imaginative tale and entertaining enough. Good job.
DGNA_Forever #2
Chapter 1: This was beautiful, but also a tear-jerker. I loved it=).
NinaNaz #3
Chapter 1: Thats a sad ending :'( Jungkook died because of what?
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