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TITLE : SCRIPTED
AUTHOR : YIFANATOR | REVIEWER : QILANOVE
TITLE 4/5
THIS TITLE WAS REALLY SUIT WITH YOUR STORY, PERFECT.
ORIGINALITY 5/5
SO FAR, I DON'T SEE ANY BAEKHYUN OR ANY EXO'S MEMBERS STORY LIKE THIS BEFORE. SO I'M INTRIGUING TO READ IT.
DESCRIPTION & FOREWORD 4.5/5
I THINK YOUR DESCRIPTION IS QUITE EFFECTIVE. IT GIVES A BRIEF SUMMARY OF THE STORY AND SOME PROFILES ABOUT THE CHARACTERS
GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION 4/5
THE SPELLING AND OTHERS WERE GOOD. AND THERE ISN'T ANY MAJOR ISSUE THAT CAN CAUSES CONCERN.
VOCABULARY 4/5
MAKE SURE YOU DON'T REPEAT ONE WORD SO MANY TIMES. THAT WILL MAKE YOUR SENTENCE BECOME WORSE.
CHARACTERIZATION 3/5
I'D SAY THIS IS A REALLY GOOD REPRESENTATION OF HOW YOU DESCRIBE THE CHARACTERS IN THE MEAN TIME, HOW THEY ACTED UP. GOOD JOB!
FLOW 8.5/10
SO FAR, THE FLOW IS GOOD. THINGS ARE PROGRESSING AT A GOOD PACE AND THERE IS NO AWKWARD GAP IN EVERY CHAPTERS.
PLOT 8.5/10
I GIVE YOU 8.5 BECAUSE EVERYTHING THAT HAPPENED IN THIS STORY. AND ALSO, MAKE SURE TO PUT THE PLOT INTO A GOOD PACE. MAKE IT EASY FOR THE READERS TO CATCH UP.
ENJOYMENT 8/10
I WOULD LOVE TO READ THE REST OF THIS STORY AND FIND OUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN BETWEEN THEM. I HOPE SOMETHING UNEXPECTED WILL HAPPEN.
OVERALL SCORE 8.5/10
YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER AND THERE'S NOTHING I WANT TO SAY. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE HOW BAEKHYUN HANDLE THE SITUATION.
I AM SO SORRY THAT I TOOK A LONG TIME TO DO YOUR REVIEW. I HOPE I'M NOT BEING SUCH A JERK OR TOO HARSH TO YOU.
YIFANATOR
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QILANOVE
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