Chapter 1: Woah. This was...so real. Thank you for giving us a story like this. A lot of authors, whilst wonderful writers, create that perfect world where everyone can be gay and not be criticized. I only wish that this was a little longer. Thanks for this, though;)

Chapter 1: You should continue this story c"x im waiting for a happy end ;;

This oneshot is wonderful <3

Chapter 1: You nailed it perfect, really enjoyed reading this even tho it hurts ;;__;;

Very nice! Saranghaeyo <3

impressive :)

Chapter 1: Sad oh so sad but for a first try its very nice. Your writing is good. I can't wait for the next things you'll post!!!

MilaWing

interesting