Today

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Today I write a story with happy thoughts and ideas. It’s far from true, sure we we’re happy, laughing in the beginning. Now I’m writing a story, a story with no ending.

 

 The start is perfect you and me smiling as the sun set over the sea. Do you know that I love you, I love you, I love you? Wish you’d come back to me.

 

 Dust is flying all around me, through the night thinking ‘why did I come here again?’ That’s right, the start of a new ending. Remembering you’re face as the dust mimics you’re reflection, thinking of you’re touch. 

 

I reach out sadly I hang my head realizing I can’t feel you anymore.

I fall on my knees as tears slide down my cheek. Maybe it’s just me or just my weird imagination, I wish it was all a dream... a nightmare I can wake up from. 

 

Today I write a story with a happy ending far from what happened just a figment of my imagination, fiction of what I wish to be true. 

Foreword

Now, who ever reads this. Do you think I should make a story around this? If so then I will, I wrote this and thought I'd put it up and ask if I should make something more of it. If you want to read more let me know by commenting or subscribing. I hope you enjoy! And just one more thing witch b2st member should be the lead? I was thinking either Yoseob or Junhyung but it's up to you. 

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C_a_r_o_LL #1
nice fic i love it!!!!
Accidentally_in_love #2
I liked how you just settled with all the B2ST members by putting "_____" XD<br />
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Your writing style is very good, I enjoyed it although I was slightly uncertain about the change of tenses during some of the 'POV' bits. Other than that, I'm impressed :)<br />
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I like the little twist at the end - very interesting ;)<br />
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And I would like to say, for some weird reason, this story got a plot bunny going around in my head, hardly even related to this story anyway haha XD<br />
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Usually my story ideas come from dreams or little tip bits I think of and put together haha XD
Accidentally_in_love #3
I would like to see Hyunseung as the lead, maybe? and I like this idea :)
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