Fates Distinction: You're Beautiful

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Choose Their Fate
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Starring: Min and Kris
Type: Series - first installment
Second Place Winner of the Heroine of Love Writing Contest

 
 
Min is your average teenager, struggling with her identitity as well as insecurities after years of belittlement and ridicule from the

school's resident mean girl. Dragged to a party by her bestfriends, Min is met with the most embarassing moment in her life yet,

after once again having all of her flaws and imperfections brought up to her. With her confidence shattered completely, Min finds

herself crying by the poolside and at this time she meets the man that would ultimately help mend her broken soul. But with one catch:


Her fate is in your hands. 


At one point in the story you will be met with two different choices.


Will you be able to change her life for the better?


Or for the worse?


Choose wisely and make your decision.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Author's Note: 
 
So I decided to do things a little differently this time around. Take this as an "I'm sorry I've been away for forever" gift.
 
 
The story behind this, is that I basically got inspired by a lot of different things, including the newer decision-based video games coming
 
out today like The Walking Dead, A Wolf Among Us, Beyond Two Souls and so on, and decided why not take it old school to when R.L
 
Stine first came up with the concept in the Goosebumps series, Give Yourself Goosebumps, where there were multiple endings based on
 
the readers choices on the progression of the story. Basically, the same rules apply here: your ending depends on the choices you make
 
throughout it.
 
 
I don't know if anyone has done it here yet -most likely a bunch have, but whatever. These will be short stories and this one in
 
particular, probably since it's the first, will have only two outcomes. And if this goes well, depending on the amount of subs, comments
 
and upvotes, I will continue on with the series already names Fates Distinction but include different stories playing on the same
 
format. This one will only have two possible outcomes but future ones will have multiple choices and outcomes and will grow to become
 
a bit more complex.  
 
 
So remember, consider your options, be fair and choose wisely. After you have chosen, you will vote on which one was your choice and
 
please be honest. I'm really curious to see how many of you chose one over the other and it will also be interesting to see how many
 
people agreed or disagreed with your decision. Remember that when you do make your choice, to stick to it. You can always read the 
 
other outcome after but for the most part, don't cheat. I'm always happy to hear your thoughts and explanations so don't hesitate to 
 
drop me a comment below. Enjoy.

 

ElleJacobs
Please comment after you read. I would totally love to hear your thoughts.

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AhRa92
#1
juju33 #2
Chapter 3: just read this and it was just the type of story i needed right now .
the reply ending was really sad but it's understandbale in that you shouldn't try to seek love to fill an emptiness in you but rather to be able to enjoy it when you're full and self-satisfied.
zephyrine
#3
I have to admit when I read this, I read the replying-ending first (I was just stupid and clicked next without even thinking) and then I really wanted to hug Kris because man, please my bias shouldn't cry hahaha
but then I read the next chapter and what a nice ending and I couldn't stop smiling like an idiot.
What I like the most about this story is not only that we can decide what ending will be for Min, but this story also has an education in it. No matter what people say, jut go on. Let's just be myself. If people don't like us, then it's ok, there will always other people who will love and support us. I really love Min here ^^
I love both ending tbh. I was completely in sadness after reading the sad one but then I felt like I have more confidence after reading the happy ending.
A very nice story. Thanks for sharing with me.
minxdahye94
#4
Chapter 3: I love both ending because it teach us to be confident, independent, and also learn lo love ourself and learn to know ourself rather than hearing someone else that jealous with us crush our confident and make us depress... All of us is beutiful in our own way... We don't need to change ourselves because of somebody else... Just be yourself and then others will respect and love you just the way you are..
baekyerin
#5
Chapter 4: congrats for being nominated :D
PuppyBrownEyes101
#6
Chapter 4: Ahhhh!! I'm so happy for you, you decieve this. I hope you win :D
waaffles
#7
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elenajacobs #8
This is cute, omggggg
Tychee
#9
Chapter 2: Muahahhaha,I picked ignore. I'm so happy that I did ;') Yayyyy,happy ending.But I got curious as to what would happen if I replied ,so i read it and OH MY GOSHHH >_<!! It was so sad,like I could feel his pain. I must say though,I really enjoyed both endings they both had a wonderful message behind it .P.S. I love the way you write ,it's totally captivating XDDDDDD
faithydoodles24 #10
Chapter 3: i'm so happy i picked ignore. i would have picked reply if i was to choose for myself. but i later decided to choose for min. and i'm so glad i did it for her. this type of story is really exciting. it's literally breathtaking. now, i'll go read the reply part. thanks for this! Good job! ^^