beauty and its perfection

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In her eyes, they were both so perfectly cruel - to the point it suffocated and choked her just to realise how beautifully cruel they were together.

 

 

 

Foreword

DISCLAIMER: This story came from my imagination and not someone else's work. I have no intention to plagiarise anyone's work. If there is a story out there that is similar to this one in terms of characters, settings, ideas and plots - that is purely coincidental. And also, please do not plagiarise. Thanks :) 

An entry for The Chosen One Writing Contest words where it won Best Female Character and also came (unofficially) 2nd.

 

Jen

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SkullMaki
#1
Chapter 2: The story is so beautiful, reading it a second time.

It would be however be great if you could make it into a more simple story so we could understand what's going on. I still have some doubts on some parts
crosstangled
#2
Chapter 1: This is so confusingly beautiful, if that even possible. I am confused but at the same time understand what this story is all about. This needs more views to be honest, i love the emotions you tried to convey. They got to me. Real bad. So yeah, upvoted, bc you deserve it :) (i feel bad that i just found this piece of art recently, anyways thank you for a beautiful story at its finest!)
SkullMaki
#3
Chapter 1: It's so confusing >< I don't evenknow if I did understand the story correctly xDD
MysteriousGirl #4
Chapter 1: You wrote it beautifully!