Hearts Delight Review Shop
Description
Thank you for visiting my review shop. I'm really looking forward to offering some constructive advice for how to improve your story. I will review anything, but unfortunately I am only able to review stories in English and possibly French (Mon Française c'est ne pas trop mal. Si vous désirez un review dans francaise, mais mon compréhension de la grammaire est certainement déplorable. Je vais vous dire si je ne pense pas que je peux review votre histoire.)
I am very honest, but I am not a cruel reviewer. I am doing this to help you so I won't say anything that I don't feel would be constructive and help you to write a better story in the future.
How to be reviewed by me:
1. Click subscribe
2. Fill out the request form, posting it in the comments.
3. wait patiently until the review for your story is posted.
Rubric:
Title and Description - /15
I will review your title and description, noting spelling and grammatical errors as well as commenting on whether they drew me into the story.
Plot - /20
Here I will give you a good idea of whether I felt that your plot was believable and enjoyable.
Characters - /20
I will comment constructively on how you developed your characters.
Pace and Flow - /15
Did your characters who hate each other suddenly fall madly in love? That's not going to work and here I will tell you why.
Grammar, Spelling and Structure - /15
If this isn't self explanatory then you really need my help.
Overall enjoyability - /15
I not only add my rating for how enjoyable the story was, but also mention which parts (if any) lost my interest.
Review Queue:
A song of Hearts by foxybunny13
Our Black Pearl by HoursTillDawn and --myprincess |
Finished:
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